I can’t fuckin g wait for the next chapter. This is like reading an actual book! I fucking love it!

This should be a movie! So good, keep it up!

Are you still work on the story you left at a good cliffhanger and I can’t wait to read the next chapters.

Continue the story

Man what a cliffhanger in the words of Sarge (Rooster Teeth Red Vs Blue in case doesn't know) Damnit Grief I have cliffhangers. Very good story loved e dry chapter and besides 36 rescue full story twice keep it up

As much as I enjoyed this I hope for more

Good story

honestly the story is great so far I won't lie and say its perfect as no story really is, there are some grammatical and even a few spelling errors but otherwise its a pleasure to read. It sometimes feels as though you meant to add another part to conversations or explanations but lost track halfway. I'm not going to pretend I know how hard it is to write something like this but just thought you'd like to know how amazing this world you have created is.

I like how come long can’t wait for the next chapter keep it Alaric boy started to pulse and glow we are strange energy, his head was pounding with the voices of his ancestor but the more he countries The louder the Voices get in till they were all in sync speaking in one voice. It was calm and gentle like A father talking to his child, it Said you I need awaken to your heritage go forth and Settle the garage that those fools hade made with Their greed and self pride, show them that sweet the league of death and reclaim what it is rightfully yours and Bring Laurie back to the clan.

I love this story so much please update more. i love reading your work because of the amount of detail and care that is put into each and every sentance. Please make more and continue writing you are a masterful writer and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

great chapter, however...space dwarves, space elves...space majic...space kobolds when?

I was not disappointed my friend well done with the battle

Jeez man, way to leave us in a depressing cliffhanger after 2 years. I just hope that updates will be regular now and in short time as well

Was the lubricant joke from the film Evolution? I got the Jaws joke, but I just wanted to ask.

This chapter was amazing. So powerful in its execution. Alarics ancestor should be one of the Greek tragedies.
I can't wait to read the rest, as I am currently on this chapter. Good luck with your writing, and have a great day!