Oh my god! I lov every second of this story!

SO GOOD! As someone who spent some time in a mental establishment myself, this was accurate and beautifully tragic. I loved the happy ending. Well done!

Adorable :) your story is perfect :)

It is ok, odin is alway quite a batard ib yout fanfic like one name somthing" tides" and 0ther fanfic.

I teresting take that odin is cop and loki biological parent were thug/ has criminal background. Odin ruin them and may have pity loki or have use for him by adopting him into the family

Cute ending

love when Thor and loki make up :)

Wow I actually feel sorry for Laufey I'm not sure that's ever happened before :)

Is it still Laufey? What is he is in this world a major criminal or something else?

What's going on?

Awesome :)

I love how you wrote loki all his wit and twisting of words :)

Ah! I love it! Great job!

I'm glad Thor didn't yell at Loki right away. One of the worse things you can do when someone attempts suicide is to yell at them.

this chapter hits home a bit because a few years ago my older sister slit her wrists while I, my parents and my two other siblings were gone. Fortunately my older sister called 911 and an ambulance came and took her to the hospital. When I found out that she had slit her wrists I felt a little guilty because I had thought about staying home and if I had maybe she wouldn't have slit her wrists (I am so glad she didn't die because if she did then I would feel really guilty).

This was a really great story, really well told 3