.. what in the hell.
there is no character to any of these flat things you call the main 6, the story is shorter then the nutrition facts and ingredients of a cereal box, and your entire premise is twilight finding/seeing a random creature.
HELLO? the cockatrice, Iron Will the Minotaur, the hydra, the changelings.. how terrible of her to see a WOLF.
or maybe your trying to say it's a human, but i can't tell. THERE'S NOTHING TO TELL ME.
my god. this is the LEAST amount of work on ANYTHING I've ever seen.

Ok ill sue *lawyers come out.* *laughs.* lols. Nawww...it looked good do continue. This is good for your first time. I would love to see more.