I am pretty sure there was more to this story as I recall reading it or something very similar years ago. Was it moved to a different site? Loved it so far and would love to rean more.

I don't understand what her job was or were she lived before Edward and I'd like to know that. But my main concern is sharing. Him forcing her to give head to another guy, etc. I'd rather he be possessive and not share her. It goes along with her being special to him. So I hope that doesn't happen

Loved this! I hope you still plan on Business Trip Pt2!
*huggles*

I am glad he apologized. I was truly concerned.

I have been reading this story in lurches for
the last week, and I have to say, I liked it
when I started out, but I am VERY perturbed
right now. Edward got upset when Bella did
to him what he delights in doing to her?
I have a problem with that. Seriously.

That was quite hot!

I really wanted to read this story. I really liked the first chapters. Unfortunately, Edward sharing Bella is a hard limit to me. Even though it would be consensual, I still think of it as incredibly disrespectful. You're a fantastic writer but I'm afraid I'm going to have to skip this one.

So you know I was reading this and I finished about 2am. I could not stop. This story has such devotion and admiration between Edward and Bella. I tried to figure Edwards mind set but Bella totally blindsided him. He did not mind. You showed that a all encompassing relationship can be caring and loving. The lemons ...fanfuckingtastic. Wow I adore this story. Blessings to you and yours this season.- Beth

See what I meant with chapter 8? They use it just to be whores...Edward has his sub...but fucks all of jaspers subs...and lets him fuck his...im sure he also has scenes with anyone else that he likes on a fucking whim...their just used up whores...
and you know what this means right? jaspers sub is alice...and what does Edward do when jasper gets a new sub? he fucks them ! so not only does he like to watch Carlisle get it on...but he watches jasper too...AND he fucked alice...
this version of Edward has fucked his way through the cast of twilight, hes used the fuck up and I don't understand how anyone could find him attractive after that.

wow, chapter 7 was fucking awkward...Edward is soooo fucking gay!

chapter 6 was stupid as fuck...bella didn't even do anything disrespectful and Edward freaks out? and hes sooo disappointed...LOL What did he expect when he had agreed? hes supposed to be the submissive...he agreed but he wasn't submissive AT ALL...its like you made drama out of nothing...you pulled it right out of thin air. Edward get mad over NOTHING...it doesn't make any sense to me, so bella crying in her room like a fucking bitch doesn't make and sense either.

well that was very predictable...its seems like bella is way too easy. Her dialogue is very predictable. Until the end of the chapter at least, then its just ridiculous. Shes only been with her dom for what? two days and already she wants to be "the master" its stupid really, and you keep telling us how inexperienced she is yet you have her asking for that?
And that shit about him being the only man that ever cared...so stupid. Are you saying that's why shes so easy? because she wants ANY male attention she can get? Does bella have daddy issues? low self esteem?
Are you implying that subs are only subs because they have these issues?

this is really repetitious...oh your so wet and ready...your mine...I need you now...its like the same shit over and over.

whats the point of being a 24 hour sub and being monogamous if hes just gonna sleep with other people anyway...? and same sex? are you telling me that Edward is gay? He fucks men?
and him having her be with other people and taping it? That's really creepy...like old fat guy at his computer creepy.
yaaaa I don't think I care for your version of domward.

you know what I don't get about bdsm? Is why people use it as a excuse to be whores. It seems that they have sex with anything their attracted to, if everyone did that the whole population would have an std.