This story was sooo amazing. The right amount of angst; sadness; comfort; and cliche of happily ever after’s. I
I’ve that it wasn’t a typical fairytale and still held that right amount of harsh reality. You are truly gifted writer. No joke, my upmost respect for you. I’m glad I stumbled onto this story.

Loved it! I really hope there’s a sequel one day!

Love it

Love it, definitely one of my favos.

I do agree with some of the other commenters, though, that from the wedding, it all felt rushed. There was so much build up and then BAM the wedding, the WEDDING NIGHT!, and all of it afterward went by in a blur. What happened to Dee? Not a single mention of her after the wedding. I'm not one for smut, but there was SO much sexual tension built up and for the wedding night to go by in one swift paragraph, I felt robbed.

Also, side note, killing Didymus felt pointless. The whole "Hoggle is in love with Sarah" bit felt unnecessary to me.

That was certainly a roller coaster, glad you didn't put it under the genre of romance as it kept my expectations of Jareth realistic within your story. It also made me glad that Sarah won at the end of the film version! Thankyou : )

I thought her rooms were right across the hall from his, as you mentioned a few chapters back...

OMG what a fantastic read!
magnificent darker twists, and such realistic character development! it all flowed flawlessly! The end, though perfect, was slightly disappointing...it left me wanting more. I don't know if anyone else is asking but I vote for a sequel! lol Thank you for sharing it. I was sad to notice this was the only labyrinth fandom piece that you have written...hopefully my "vote" above will help influence positively...lol

Although I do agree with some previous reviewers, this story was AMAZINGLY written!
I go through periods where all I want to watch and read is Labyrinth, and your story was one that popped out to me as an interesting one. I couldn't put it down! I wish it didn't end, although makes sense that you didn't want to drag it out so much.
I understand your view on the story, but I definitely wish that Sarah wasn't so hesitant throughout the entire story to welcome Jareth into her bed. But I loved it nonetheless! you should consider writing another JarethxSarah

I agree that the portrayal here is creepy and disturbing but maybe that's intentional? People writing about evening out odds but would Jareth really have treated her as an equal? Domestic abuse is a very serious matter but rarely is the psychological side looked at. I'm not sure how I feel on this but I don't think Sarah would have become his equal especially if she had lost...

im afraid I have to agree with one of the precious reviewers, this story portrays a very disturbing and unhealthy abusive relationship.

Keep up the good work loving it alot

Normally i'm not one for reviews of this nature. But i have to say are you serious? Your a great writer, excellent dialogue, but lousy lousy lousy character evolution. I'm not trying to be mean, but your fic could fit in the definition of relationship and more so emotional Abuse. It's disturbing. Your sarah might as well be best buds with harley Quinn. Okay. Moving on i read the whole thing because there is excellent build. The problem is you never even the odds. It would have been great to have Jareth put down a few pegs. You had so many opportunities for character growth? In the end sarah loses herself, independent nature and humsnity. Jareth remains a prick. Your a great writer lots of potential but this fic saddened me because of all the could be's, should be's. Don't stop writing, but work on growth and not abuse. Its unhealthy to promote.

Grest Story! You stay true with the character till the end. I like your characterization it was a well-written story although the wedding seems to be on fast paced.

Nice to know Jareth hasn't gone completely soft. I really do like this.