Hahahaha! Those last 2 lines were just great! This if the first and only crossover of this series that I've found I liked. Great job with this!

Nice comment at the end ;)

hahaha gotta love Hiruma!

you know some thing like this happen to me only it was soooooo awkward!

I thought it waS an awesome one shot I think you should write more just as good but make them longer or write a bunch more of one shots

I liked it! Good job and keep up the good work!

hahaha yay! you're back! i really missed your IY/eyeshield 21 fics :)))

I’m glad to hear you are back! I missed ya! It was a great story! You make me want to re-read all other Hiruma/Kag stories that are out there! Too bad there isn’t that many.

Totally awesome! Absolutely loved it! Continue writing cause you do it great!8)

All the bowing right now. So glad you're back! And as usual, an amazing story. I'm not going to be greedy, but now that you've updated, the expectation for more is in the air. Just saying 3

Haha! Of course Hiruma would want to continue screwing Kagome.

Anyway, fantastic one-shot! I absolutely love your KagomeHiruma fics.

Please continue excelling as a writer.

His last sentence, Heh.

I love this pairing! Keep up the good work

I really loved reading this little one-shot of yours! Their conversation... err arguement was very interesting and amusing lol hmm it was kinda sweet too :) So great work.

Ex-chan! TTATT You have no idea how much I've missed you! Thank you for coming back! We knew you couldn't stay away! LMAO! So This one-shot was freaking awesome and I hope that you decide to upload something else to save us Eyeshield 21 Xover hungry minds. Loved it! Simply loved it! 8D