i need a sequal!

not my fav ending but still a great story

I AM SO SATISFIED WITH THIS FICCCCCC WRITING WAS GREAT ALL OF ITTTTTT there may have been a few typos but pshtttt whatever! Kyuubi actually came in handy and I really liked the original plot! Using naruto's mind as another dimension but you used it so well~~~!

...Interesting. I like liked it. It's a very different sort of plot than what I'm used to, and a the whole concept a little confusing fundamentally, But it was a good story. But I mean, using the goo as lube? Bleh. And at the same time it made sense and was kinda hot. Whatever. I'm tired and I'm rambling. I liked the story.

Woah, that was the first multi-chapter'd fic id read in a while. I liked how it made me wish it was canon aha

This story was amazing and I love the humor! I sent this to my friend to read and she will probably enjoy this too. Good job!

This was a unique fic with the two of them trapped in this bizarre, living mental space and them having to work together to find a way out. I liked that they were both hampered by something: Sasuke had his brains but none of his chakra, and Naruto had all of his chakra, but not the memories to use it. (Tee hee, the only thing he ended up remembering was Sasuke. Even if it was because Sasuke was right there in front of him. I liked the line that with Sasuke as the focus of his memories, his life played out like some kind of teen romance. That's pretty much Kishimoto's manga, isn't it?) LOL. I think if you'd really wanted to mess with them, you could have done it the opposite and given Naruto the brains and Sasuke the chakra. Somehow I think Sasuke was right that in his desperation to save him, Naruto would have figured out a way to get them both out.

Very cool ending. I wanted Sasuke to stay and the two of them to settle down together and be happy...but that would have been totally OOC. At least while Itachi is still alive. I'm surprised Naruto didn't insist one more time that they could help Sasuke defeat Itachi before he left, but I think it was a sign of how they'd both matured that Naruto finally understood Sasuke has things he needs to accomplish, and Sasuke finally gave Naruto a sort of, unstated promise in return. I think old Sasuke wouldn't have woken Naruto up before he left, and old Naruto would have tried to fight him.

Just idle speculation here, but this fic makes me wonder how the rest of the manga would have played out if Naruto and Sasuke had reached an understanding right before Orochimaru/Itachi died. (I think good, canon-based AU that comes up with a compelling enough "what if" scenario makes you ask those sorts of questions.) I'm assuming with what happened here, Sasuke wouldn't have bothered going back to Orochimaru, or maybe he would have to get him away from Konoha (and then kill him if Orochimaru got pissed about his decision to leave). But then what would have happened after he found out the truth about Itachi? One can only hope he'd have come to the "I'm not going to destroy everything my brother worked for" decision MUCH sooner. (The yaoi fan in me also likes to imagine that he'd have gone straight to Naruto with Tobi's revelations for a little h/c sex time, instead of sticking with Akatsuki.)

Think you might ever write another Naruto fic? I like your take on this couple. :)

Hey, this was really really good, i congratulate you for your achievement too, you know, finishing a multi-chap fic, oh well, hey it would be great if you made a sequel of this, there are some yummy plots this could follow up with. Oh well, if you dont, this was so good still, well, just had to say it, bye bye.)

I want more. Please? Meow? Sequel? yes, sequel is a good idea, you should right a sequel.

*smile* I found the insides of Kyuubi very interesting haha. The slugs and all XDXD (I don't really follow the anime anymore so I haven't seen the fillers that you said inspired you to write this)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

/Dragonwolf

This was a cool story. It kinda screams sequel tho enuh… if you've considered it I would definately read :)

Sweets

Have you ever thought about a sequel? Cause I'd totally loved it... BTW I loved the story, funny and dramatic, yet lovely, just perfect. :)

Awsomely Great story!

Btw I never knew wensday came after Tuesday...

Also my fav line was: some thing like: even if it had been a thousand years at least they has each other" I could not stop laughing at that!

Exellent work

Haaah, that was a fun story to read! I'm not sure why, but I especially loved how you portrayed memory-loss Naruto. It was just a plot point that I particularly enjoyed for reasons not entirely known to myself. Fortunately for me, I didn't have time to read this story until it was all posted, so there was no wait time between chapters. Hoorah for all of the SasuNaru! Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go to bed hoping that my subconscious will be kind enough to translate your fanfic into a pleasant dream. ;)

this was an amazing story. I really like the emotion that comes through. Very raw. I Loved it. :D