New convert to the fandom, watched some of the series this morning, and I am loving this. It feels like an extended episode of the show, like a four parter or something.

cool

I've thought about Trixie's punishment and...it makes no sense? What crime did she actually do-lie? Well she's a showmare; that's the whole point. She didn't even bring the ursa to town. It's like a child watch a magician do a box sawing trick and proceed try it at home. No one blames the magician.

She may be a braggart, but no actual crime in that. She humiliates those who ACCEPTS HER CHALLENGE. And, if I recalled right, she did help send the ursa away.

Community service, really? What for?

awesome

This... is one of the best chapters that I have ever read. I was barely able to hold back my tears several times. You are a great writer and I look forward to read any new 'My Little Pony' fics that you might make in the future. (I've already read your other current ones.)

MLP FiM has had numerous villains, all unique with their own definition of evil, but Checker, that bitch, I despise her, I've got to say that your story feels like it belongs on the show itself, I love this story, this story is the redemption story that Trixie deserves, and I adore it, I also apreciate that you reference previous episodes, sometimes the references feel a little forced but others are brilliantly executed; such as Spike emphasizing with Trixie's desire to make amends with the townsfolk due to the fact he destroyed the town in 'Secret of my Excess' and 'Stare Master', 'Hearts Warming Eve' and so many others, I'm on straight to the last two chapters and super excited to do so :)

Awesome story. I really loved the way that you had the story go into a few twists and turns. I can't wait to see what else that you have written.

when i read the part with checker and her real voice, i could imagine this:

REMEMBER ME TRIXIE,
WHEN I RUINED YOUR LIFE
I SOUNDED JUST LIKE THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS

This is awesome I am a Brony and this my favorite fan fiction I have ever read

awesome story

let me guess that it takes place between season 2 and 3 since the changeling invasion was mentioned and shining is a prince, and no crystal empire was mentioned meaning king sombra has not been dealt with

Seniorcopycat has plagiarised a paragraph from this chapter and put it in the twelfth chapter of his fic, "My Little Pony: The Human Chronicles Season 3"; specifically, the first part of Twlight's reprimand of Blueblood.

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N. Harmonik of Eliminator

I like the reference to back to the future

This is story so good I'm reading twice.

Truly a magnificent story. Just couldn't stop reading it...

Good. Hope Checker stays there forever. Really great story. And loved the happy ending