Very well written and perfectly steamy! You write sex scenes and passion very well! My only nitpicks are 1) Mycroft was a bit too much of an ass and 2) what about the terrorist attack? Lol I’m horrible it I was kind of looking for some whomp! Lol but otherwise this was awesome!

I love how real this story is. Beautiful

Wow. This fic has had me going from the start. So very realistic in its portrayal of how very human the two protagonists really are. Their interactions, be it sexual or just normal conversation, convey the author's firm grasp on the characters' personalities and traits. It was truly wonderful reading this fic. Very true to form and, at times, incredibly hot and sexy. Thank you for the effort I know it took to put this together.

God, another sweet piece to this puzzle!

Oh the feels...the feels...

Oh such excellent imagery and descriptions. I love it! Of course a date with Sherlock would be extravagant in every meaning of the term. This is a delightful chapter.

Wow. Not only was this chapter incredibly sweet and sexy hot, but it was quite cute and funny there at the end.

Whoo, sexy time! Dang that was fantabulous. I don't know how you manage to keep the momentum flying forward, but dammit you do!

Phew! Gonna need a cold shower after that hot plate of perfection you just served up here. Man, you can tear up a hot Johnlock scene no problem. Damn.

Ah, interesting and contemplative turn of thought to this chapter. Deeper and deeper...

Very intriguing interpretation of Sherlock's past. Loved how you incorporated music into it. As usual, I am typing this note as quickly as possible because I can't wait to be able to read more of your deliciously fantastic fic!

Holy shit. How can you place such perfection into the written word?! My own fanfics seem so immature and lacking in sophistication now. This chapter was beauty, was emotive bliss, was as close to actually recording a description of the strength of new love as anything I have ever come across. It defies proper reviewing because of the power contained within. And so I simply offer up a humble: Bravo.

Melting melting... Ah Gods, you're laying down such perfection here.

Nice development of their relationship. You've got a firm grasp of human behavior, despite how inhuman Sherlock can be.

Simply fantastic. I love how they get lost in their thoughts about each other. And now...let's ride!