Reviews for A Father, A Lover
jeonbunbunnyjjk chapter 15 . 6/27
hi, its been over a year already. i hope you hadnt forgotten about this one. :

its my first time reviewing a fic as im usually a silent reader but i really love this story so i just had to. please author-sama.
allie chapter 15 . 5/13
this is a REALLLLL GOODDDD story! it has so many feels, and is well-written! It's just sad though, since the chapters are short this time. Still, I'll have myself enjoy reading this story right to the very end, so hope you update and finish this!
Jingle chapter 15 . 3/29
I know I sound whiny but please do update it...It's been one year since u last updated...So please update asap...
Guest chapter 15 . 3/17
Hey Illusion,this story is amazing...The plot...The characters...Their personality...Everything u have weaved in this story seems to be in perfect hermony with each other...Nothing is amiss...The portrayal of characters,specially their originality touched my heart...You have done a great job uptill now and I hope you will continue to do so till this literary piece is finished...I know many people have lost interest in Beelzebub because it didn't have a second season nor it's much popular compared to Gintama and other animes of it's genre...But both the manga and anime was great...But here you are writing your own story by borrowing the characters...It doesn't matter whether you stick to the original plot or create your own,this story belongs to you and you only...You are it's creator and you have the right to change the course of this story...But I have only one favour to ask of you,please don't discontinue it...Please...I hope I will see the end of the story...So please treat this story as your own and think of the characters as your own creation...Please finish it...It's my sole request to you
Insanity1614 chapter 15 . 2/15
Please update!
Ria chapter 15 . 1/21
Hey, I don't know whether you are still active in this site or not, but I wholeheartedly hope that you are going to finish this wonderful fiction... The fiction is written so well that, even though the last chapter leaves in my heart a feeling of inexplicable sadness, I had read it more than enough times, that the whole story got imprinted in my memory... I don't know if u still write or not, but it is my earnest request to you to complete this beautiful piece of work. It's not everyday that I come across stories, that from the very first chapter, had occupied a prominent place in my heart... I desperately want you to update it... You ought to know that there are still some people who hold in their hearts that you are going to update someday and it's this hope that drives them to check regularly this site in hopes of seeing an update from you. Please I request you not to abandon it, because if you do, you'd be doing a disservice to a great number of fans... I am not going to pressurize you to update it outright, take how ever much time you require, but please finish it... That's all I want you to know... Rest assured I'll be waiting for your updates even if I have to wait for an eternity... May God bless you...
Littlestar42 chapter 15 . 12/2/2019
Whenever you can please update!
I really like this story is unique and beautiful
Guest chapter 15 . 9/27/2019
AAAAAAA THANKYOOOU
I would never forget this old, dusty, humble, amazing story...
Guest chapter 15 . 6/3/2019
I thank you for the update
Rui-Etoille Suzuki chapter 15 . 5/20/2019
Waaah this finally updated! I’m soo happy uwuu ! It’s getting so good ! Pleaseee update more quickly than a yearly one too!
Guest chapter 15 . 4/19/2019
YESS FINALLY! After all this years..
You're here again..
Thankyouuu

XOXO
macario1214 chapter 15 . 3/31/2019
Man this story is epic and this new chapter as well, keep it up Illusion
TeraBaapBSDK chapter 2 . 3/29/2019
man this is not beelzebub, you are just writing a love story with beelzebub characters, not a single power or thing is common, dude you are shit; really you are shit
Kriscia chapter 15 . 3/26/2019
I've been waiting this chapter for sooo~ long! And I'm so happy that you decided to update.

I really missed the relationship between this complicated couple and how have evolved it through all this time, that's why I decided to read this fic one more time and I can say I'd do it again :)

Please, update soon and I hope it doesn't take you too much.

Sorry for my english, it's really bad!
jdcocoagirl chapter 15 . 3/23/2019
i did expect that..
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