really good story.

Loved the story. There needs to be more out there where Steve lets Danny take care of him. You should add more chapters.

That was a great story.

Love both these stories, yes the follow on to this, I'm late to them. Never liked Lori & never liked Catherine.

This was so sweet and prefect

love this and I hated Lori too. You know it is funny I think no matter your stance on the same sex thing I think anyone with Danny and Steve except Danny and Steve annoys people lol They are perfect for each other

"kept hinting at ways she could die; falling out of the helicopter, losing her in the jungle, shoot her and then say they thought it was an enemy, take an enemy's gun and shoot her saying she died in the line of fire, etc..."

I like the way you think girl. Carry on.

*flails* Love it!

Thank you for writing and sharing.

I love your version over the actual episode! I keep hoping that CBS will step up to the times and just let the truth out but I guess I'll just keep reading about them until then! Thanks for sharing!

This is officially my favorite 2x10 code! Just perfect :D

Really good, more please hopefully sequels

awe I love it and you should have left Bori Lori in North Korea nobody would miss her

Wonderful. Needs an epilogue or part two.

awww i love it

Nice reworking of the episode.

I look forward to reading more of your work.