This fanfic is amazing!

I'm so sad it's dead.

Please update

this is excellent. just the right amount of au and original story line. and everyone is in character! i eagerly wait for the next instalmebt of this story :)

please update soon this story is really good!

This story is amazing! You should continue it. Please please please.

If it's ideas u need how about this for the next chapter;
after Astral wakes up in Yuma's room (Yuma's trying to keep him a secret) he is scared that he has been captured. Likewise Yuma is scared that he has helped an alien, but to a lesser extent. Before Yuma reveals himself to Astral, he tries to fly away, but ends up collapsing on the floor from his injury. Yuma rushes in and eventually helps him up, he then starts to question him about who he is and where he's from. Astral tells him (much to his own surprise). Yuma says he'll look after him until he is healed...

and then whatever... it's not great but if it'll start u writing PLEASE use it!

I'm disappointed u haven't updated :'(
I REALLY WANT U TO UPDATE CAUSE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

please update quickly... I've been waiting for ages and am really excited

great story! update soon!

So interesting, the same Astral but visible to everyone, and the same characters with the same personality but at the same time a bit different from the original story. Hoping for the next chapter.

PS Who has Number 39, Hope?

Great chapter! I hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhv ASTRAL GOT SHOT OH NO PLEASE PLEASE YUMA HELP ASTRAL AND DONT YOU DARE LET ASTRAL DIE ...OR ELSE RRRRRAAAAARRGGGHHH! T.T

OMIGOSH! This story is amazing! I love the style of the writing and the new universe it's set in. I LOVE the midnight dueling and the storyline that's the same and yet so different. I love Astral's thoughts and how he sees things. I love how he can touch people and I love the animosity between him and Kaito. Dude this story is amazing, please update soon!
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Omg only read one chapter and was like wow! Update soon! :)

Waiting for the moment when Haruto will be intoduced. Kaito loves him so much, while his father uses both of them as pawns! *sobs* This one is definitely one of the best Zexal stories around, which has intriguing story and well-written chapters and isn't a shipping fic.