Oh, you are really good at poetry! I enjoy your writings a lot and I hope you continue!

Very well written .. you have a way with words that makes me believe that writing isnt the only artform your amazing at. A superbly sublime soul you are indeed . Whoever holds ur benign apropos heart is a very fortunate . I was inspired by these to write these_ (im not as good as you though.. )..

Wishfull..
_his imagination ran with the idea that maybe she didnt just forget her ring and necklace.. but his damaged sensor wouldnt let him have these ideas, longing. deep beneth his outer shell ..

he overprotectively lead his silliest most naive & oldest only friend (his imagination...) back into a more realistic birdcage of a scenario..

Contents..
_when he stumbled into the hidden chambers of that dark and musty catacomb he absorbed the thick resonance of ithe inflicted and the inflictors through lingering hieroglyfs on every centimeter of every stone .. even the high rise lime stone ceilings had corroded, once vibrant illustrations .. aimed ostrasization echoed over and over loosing its volume luster after each previous ambiguative vers. Of the initial fecal like content being conveyed and slungg.. like the stars, sun,& ..pretty much all living things eventually do.

. he never would find it easy, or pleasurable when he would participate and sling phrases that conveyed his happiness in letting go .. cause it wasnt true.. it just seemed like his healthiest mask..

Face...
He always played ig when it came to being unaware of her literally meaning things ... cause he thought she looked very cute / sexy when she made her signature madd im gonna ruin your life face... he thinks she knew that since he requested it for a week after she shared the "faces" ancient origin along with a pic of her doing it exiting the vage cage.

Sleep..
He went to bed early every nite.. for a year.. cause some of her last words were.. "Time heals these kinds of pains" ... they shared the need for all natural remedies before entertaining a doctor.. and jinxed on the topic of over cooking the benificial neuts away from vegatables..

that was good i def want you to continue

Oh, that's so cool! I love the poem! Though, I am sorry that you're ending this. NIce work!

You're a really good poet :D

How beautiful. ;_;

I'm not too much of a Zutarian, but I think their friendship in the series was really sweet. :) Adore your poetry, you should write more.

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This is genuinely amazing. I love how you covered every important point of contact in the show's Zutara with vague, yet precise poetry. I commend you on this. Great job!

This is the first story I'm favoriting on the website :D

I think this is amazing :) I love the abruptness and vaugness of each line and how you dont know what is going on unless you have seen the show

This is really beautiful

Nice.

What theme is it? (Free-verse, ballad, etc.)