A wonderful story. Deeply insightful.

Fucking hell. This was such a beautiful, painful story. Sometimes it hurt so good, and sometimes it was agonizing and sad.

But shit. Fucking beautiful.

Excellent. Especially this final chapter. It really helps me believe Goodbye has a positive outcome.

ahhh - "he kissed her and she knew-she knew she loved him. And she knew he was her everything" 3

you're so good at writing, you've expressed everything that needs to be expressed and interpreted within the mind of Sarah Walker.. you're really good!

Wow. This is an absolutely amazing, heartfelt, beautiful piece of writing. All of it.
So perfect.

That's right. I said it. It was perfect.

AND magical. Wow.

Beautiful story, albeit hard to follow at times due to the tangents you frequently interject in the narrative. It's also a nice post-finale ending, although I'm not as optimistic as you are about the outcome. I have no doubt that Chuck kissed her when she fake-escaped Quinn and arrived home. She's also been around him, smelled him, been held by him, and so on, and she still said she had felt nothing for him. I think the road ahead will be a lot more difficult than a magical kiss, unfortunately.

This is one of the most beautiful fics out there. Such a joy to read.

I don't even know how to describe how perfect this is.

Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.

So beautiful. Just so, so beautiful. You're very talented.

The amount of detail you put into this short fic was amazing. I truly enjoyed the emotion and conflict that was shown from Sarah's POV. Great job with this story!

The amount of detail you put into this short fic was amazing. I truly enjoyed the emotion and conflict that was shown from Sarah's POV. Great job with this story!

I can think of no words to express my feelings towards your story except: perfect. Thank you for writing this.

Ruy

wow! I love getting a chance to look inside Sarah's mind and her thoughts, given that she is by far my favourite character in the entire show, so this story has been unbelievably amazing. What a final chapter too. Their love overcomes all obstacles, it is truly awe-inspiring.

until next time,

coreymon77

This chapter was perfect. Thank you.

It was beautiful my friend. Thank you for your contributions.