This was a good story, the forward from the book was hilarious.

No sex scenes at all !

If he was so damn strong why the hell did he let them do that to him! It just makes me mad!

Good but I don't like it when ichigo is weak

It soooo sad :'(. But still a good story!

my friends and I are reading the story and we all agree that its a nice start to the story

I'm sorry. I can't read anymore! Ichigo is such a FUCKING PANSY! He is suppose to be strong in my opinion, maybe not yours but its mine. I tried reading further but I couldn't, so I say sorry once more. Not a flame, just an opinion, sorta. It's a good story and a good plot but I just can't read it.

this is one of my faves XD just like a fairytall

Shirk biing uke nice Idea Big like

this was nice i'm upset that some of my fav people died but this was still nice

first hisagi then nnoritora then my precious Grimm-kitty then Ulqu-bat! y do all my fav people die

NOOOOOOOO Y DID HISAGI HAVE 2 DIE? HE'S MY FAV SOUL REAPER T_T

oh my god i read thise story twice and the first time i cried wehn hisagi died it was so unfait to ichigo but im so happy he ended up with shiro you pulled it all togeather butifully and i would not change it at all great story!(:

Awwww what a purfect ending to the story I love it wow! Anw awwwww it is finished:( oh well on to the seqal

Love it and you are mean. Lol verry we'll done! Tx