Love it! :)

AHHHHHHH! I just read the whole thing! Took a while…But I'm glad I read it! It was incredible! Great writing! I loved it!

How is Rover so thick?! River and the Doctor's baby... AKA the child of the TARDIS and the last Timeliord's baby... how could it NOT be a Timelord? A new life form is beginning in River's womb. THERE IS NO OTHER TIMELORD WALKING.

A well-written whirlwind of an epic adventure! 10 out of 10 stars!

lovely story

Great story!

This story had to be the best story I've read so far! Most stories that I've read they never tell what happens to The Doctor and River after the crisis is over. I hope you create another story about the family's adventures with their new addition to the family. I look forward to more of your stories! :)

Aaaaawwwwwwweeee So cute! : )

Had a wonderful time following the journey of this story. Nice ending and I look forward to whatever you write next :)

~Shannon

Lovely - can't wait for the next chapters

awesome i love how rory comes in at the end and punchs the master and he ran :) upload soon please!

GO RORY! I LOVE that Roman Centurion!

Brilliant story - the master had better stay away now the doctor is coming back, but where have 59 and 60 gone? I can't view them - could you try re-uploading them perhaps?

As soon as I read "The Master" I was all OH SHIT! MIND BLOWN! OH SHIT! SHIT'S GOING DOWN.

I did not see that one coming. I like the baby/River dialog

looking forward to the next chapter.