Love it

That was really amazing. :)

This is amazing! I love your description and detail and you wrote Lloyd and Zelos so well! I liked what you said about how Lloyd seeing through Zelos made him angry, I'd never looked at it that way but it makes sense. :) I look forward to another story from you. _

I love this. I love these two, and I love them together most of all, and I love how you depicted them. Because Zelos isn't all alright, and it's easy to miss that, and I think that the way you depicted that deep-seated pain is really beautiful and just...great. I love this! Great fic!