Wowww I just loved it. Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. The story had dealt with difficult issues regarding Bella’s lifestyle and although she had made grave mistakes it was explained. As the story’s title suggests, it is about Bella finding the light in her own terms. It would be pointless if she’d returned to her old life and habits after spending a night in Edward’s condo. Alsooo best Edward I’ve read in a while. You are very talented :) thank you again

"My mother three months ago." Died? Remarried? Gave birth? Ran away?

"As bazaar as it may seem" LOL It's BIZARRE. A bazaar is where things are sold.

"Before I was lead into his bedroom" It's LED, which sounds like the metal LEAD (hence the confusion, I suppose). LEAD (pronounced "leed") is the present-tense form of the verb; LED is the past-tense form. Neither has anything to do with the metal LEAD.

"Woah, woah, woah" No, no, no. It's WHOA, WHOA, WHOA, (Look it up if you don't believe me.)

"Like, do I have free reign" It's REIN. (Look it up if you don't believe me.)

"Were the other times you're fault, too?" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. You should've used YOUR.

"Look beyond the psychical." Do you mean "physical"?

"reigning in my amusement" It's REINING IN. Think about using a horse's reins to control it. To "reign" means to rule over something like a country. A monarch reigns.

It's spelled WHOA, not WOAH. Look it up if you don't believe me.

"Whose this?" It's WHO'S, the contraction for WHO IS.
And it's PER SE, not PER SAY.

"When we had past the bank" It's PASSED, which is a verb. "Past" is an adverb telling "where." (We passed several cars when we drove past the bank.)

Amazingly story! Thank you for writing this masterpiece!

Really disappointed in this Bella. She has a lot of good choices and people to help but she willingly chooses the wrong path. Do you realize how pathetic and foolish that sounds? This is unbelievable because no one behave like this unless they are of unsound mind. Grief is not a good enough explanation. Even though you have a good writing style, the protagonist is just intolerable with no redeeming qualities so far... So... Abandoning this story...

Thank you for sharing your story. I really enjoyed reading it.
I was so mad at Bella after the Eric incident and left a review expressing that. Since then the story has expressed more of what she was thinking and going through so I was appeased some. I was glad she acknowledged all her mistakes and glad the story seemed to express that grief played a large part in her actions. I still think more of her state of mind should have been expressed earlier in the story so I could have been rooting for her instead of hating her.
I think you right very well and thank you for sharing.

Unbelievable... I was already feeling quite disappointed in Bella's choices but now I'm just down right disgusted. I think this story is a bit offensive to homeless people. Bella has had a choice not to be on the street this whole story and she chose to anyway. She's not on drugs, had a good childhood with supportive parents. She has created her own problems where there are people who really don't have a choice that they are homeless. Her father was a cop for Christ sake, the prostitution is bad enough but she's just going to walk into a dangerous situation for money. Who gives a homeless prostitute that kind of money for three nights? I guess we can add unintelligent to her list of bad qualities. I assume this is a Bella and Edward story but he is too good for her. He seems to be warming up to her but I have no idea why, her only redeeming quality seems to be her art. I would feel better if Bella's back was against a wall when she was doing these deplorable things. Let's not forget Edward's rule of no prostitution while she was staying with him, she is selfish. She has help and people who care about her but she's just spitting in their faces. She has choices...
That being said I do think you write very well. I just wish she did the things she did because she had no other option. I think the fact that she has options and continues on her path she's on shows a lack of character on her part. Unless we're going to find out that she really has some mental problems because that might explain some things.