Oh, your story presents a different perspective about the cliche plot of arranged marriages. So it turns out your story is not a cliche at all. I love the way you constructed such a kick ass Sakura who befriends Deidara. They're amazing together! In canon, Sakura always follows her feelings, so I think that if she was in this kind of situation,it wouldn't be strange or absurd if she left the village. I like your Itachi as well. He's a genius but he's not perfect. And he is jealous, that's so nice. I hated Ino here, but I understand how she fits in the story. Thank you for your nice work!

Really liked it

A good ending after all the ups and downs... Would have been better if there was an epilogue too...

I preferred DeiSaku on this one as the end game for it developed much better than ItaSaku but... InoSuke ruined it all. I don't understand Ino's feud against Sakura too, it's too petty. Sakura is Ino's good friend, then she would know that Sakura loved Itachi, especially since Naruto and Kakashi knew. And Ino should have reconciled with Sakura when she found truth too, but NO.

KuroDei tho... I'm meh. I don't have any opinion about them, but it sucks that DeiSaku's dynamic reduced to deep friendship, especially after the history they share.

Since there are plenty of hints of romance between different characters, I'd have liked to see NaruHina element too, but no, there wasn't any mention of Hinata too.

Regardless of my distaste towards the rushed ending– especially towards how Sakura started to forgive Itachi and began to consider him as love interest again– I find the whole story really engaging.

Thank you for writing this.

amazing story! Love It!

Definitely my favorite Itasaku fic on this website and from this author. The amount of detail and love that went into writing this has to be off the charts. Wonderful read.

Damn this is the first ever fic I've ever read that actually made me feel the emotions of the characters, especially Sakura's. Whenever something happens, my heart drops on my stomach along with her's. You portrayed their characters sooo well! I know this was written a long time ago and I regret not finding this soon but wow this story makes all the itasaku/deisaku story I've read irrelevant.

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The only thing I keep thinking was the ending. At first I hoped for Itasaku to reunite, but deisaku's relationship was really what got to me. Again, you really went there when other authors wouldn't even dare hahaha. They can never be together, but as Naruro said "it was good while it lasted." and even Deidara admitted Sakura was the one person that always gets him. Just bc they're each other's 'greatest love' doesn't mean they have to be each other's lasts.

Ugh this post had gone too long. ALL I WANT TO SAY IS THAT YOU'RE FUCKING AWESOME AND I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AND THANKS FOR WRITING THIS MASTERPIECE I LOVE U

OMG I am so satisfied with the ending. Did I think Deidara and Sakura should have been even though I love Itachi? Somewhat. Did this spark my interest in the DeiSaku fandom? Hell yes this is the only fanfic where I actually see Deidara as more than just a brotherly figure or a one-night stand. With that being said can someone give me a list of GOOOD DeiSaku fanfics please?!

I know the moment was serious but I laughed when Sakura had the almighty Itachi in a chokehold. But all that aside that was by far the most intense flashback and I enjoyed every minute of it. I wonder what the Neighbors were thinkin after all they are in an apartment.

1st things 1st Itachi needs to not draw any conclusions there are gaps that he didn't hear also holy shit Sasuke what happened you sweetie!

I wish this was just SasuSakuIta instead. More interesting.

Que drama

I have read each and every story written by you and it 's simplicity and beauty never ceases to amaze me. Kudos.

It was all so very beautiful indeed... The relationship between them all its beautiful and it makes me smile, laugh and cried ... Its truely is beautiful. I am glad I came across this fic.

But one thing though, why do you make Sasuke end up with Ino... You could have leave that part, I'm not happy there I just want to kick you when you mention that. Ino is to be with Sai or Shika ... Not any Uchihas .

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I shall like to see you do a DeiSaku fic! You made Deidara's character so endearing, and you made it fit how he would love someone like Sakura. You've established as much during their first meeting. Wonderful