Reviews for War on Spades
Guest chapter 3 . 6/23/2016
A beautiful story it is. I. Am. So. Fucking. Glad. It's. Not. Tragic. I WOULD'VE BEEN EMOTIONALLY UNSTABLE IF NOT. THANK YOU!
RandomThingiesHere chapter 3 . 6/11/2014
Ah I really loved your story, I guess to choose one of the things I liked, I generally really liked your character portrayals _ I guess that would be the lack of OOC-ness in my opinion then?
west4242564 chapter 3 . 5/10/2014
Great job in this fic. I like your idea of how the cards are related to the land. That's really cool. Really long chapters are awesome and I finished it in one sitting. That's saying something. Keep up that great writing [0]7[0]/*
Dianizx chapter 3 . 10/21/2013
This was adorable, hot, and perfect. I really really liked it. Thank u very very much for writing it (idk why u say ur bad at sex scenes, cuz they were hot as hell)! (I really hope someday if u have time u could add like a prologue of this story, like some years later or sth, and just show fluff and porn of those two dorks, because I'm not even kidding when I say that this story goes to my favs) thank u thank u thank u!
Tassy Riddle chapter 3 . 4/8/2013
AMAZING STORY! *-*

I just loved it! Oh, so sweet, Queen Arthur and King Alfred! So perfect together!
Anfuu chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
Somehow, I wish there's some continuation, not a specially long one, but even a short one would be great ... Including Peter and Arthur, if Arthur will finally remember Peter, or if he will always forget him, and Peter comes in a state of acceptance ...
And including the fact that Alfred is now a King, and as the time passes by, he sees how much Matthew, with who he used to grow up with, grows up alone.
It was beautiful, anyway, sometimes, I really wonder if a Happy Ending would be attend me at the end, and sure, here it is !
I'd really like to see what happens with Peter&Matthew tho, but I guess it's too much to ask lol
It was a real pleasure to read this!
Empress Vegah chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
HOLY SHIT

I AM SO LUCKY TO HAVE YOU AS MY SECRET SANTA

BECAUSE YOU HIT ALL MY SECRET KINKS HOLY SHIT *MANRY HUGGRES*

You. You said you've been rusty but hot damn I could say your writing has dramatically improved, and I can only pinpoint very, very subtle mistakes. The flow of the story is perfect. It's not dragging, and the plots and twists of everything you have is just. OH MY GOD CAN I JUST HUG YOU?!

I seriously didn't mind the wait, but then this chapter just made everything perfect! YOU EVEN WROTE SMUT, OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH! *tears of joy* I love the one-year age difference between Alfred and Arthur, of how the land chose her king (finally) - through death, and Arthur's reaction to the news, I love I love the inclusion of Peter and their apparent role in the land, plus the death match that will solve their conflict, and how the Spade roses didn't want to hurt Alfred, it's just... you've thought them so well and I'm seriously blown away!

Arthur is seriously strong! JUST WOW omg. Plus the ability to knit themselves shut whenever they are injured! I love how he represents Vulnerability but he possesses the greatest magic of all. Plus the existence of the King, the symbol of Victory, simultaneous with Arthur's own victory due to his despair, it's just... heartbreaking and beautiful! ;u;

I love everything. But what I love most is you, for writing this, for granting my prompt and hitting all my favorites! Thank you so much, thank you! You've made me a very happy girl!

REMEMBER, YOUR WRITING HAS IMPROVED, YOU'RE NOT RUSTY!

All my love,
Evvy
Transcendentalist Tangencies chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Awesome! :)
SkittlelificDots chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
Don't ever change.
I mean, the way you wrote those plot twists and made it to where somebody would assume that there wouldn't be a happy ending...
I love your writing style... Thank you for such a lovely fanfiction3
Ayumu smile chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
Awesome story! Love it! And no wonder the writtings sound a bit off at parts but its still awesome! :D love i!
april.sherbet chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
I think your writing improved a lot! It just flows so well and definitely worth the wait.
01blackcat02 chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story and I think your writing actually improved. Chapters 1 and 2 both had tons of spelling mistakes (which, I'm not going to lie, I find annoying and distracting cuz it stops the flow of reading) But in this chapter I didn't see any so good job :)

Also good luck with your studies but I hope you will have time to write USUK!
hexa chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
This chapter! Made me cry, smile and soooo emotional fc eifhfcicmime
Everything is just so perfect I felt so sad that it ended hope on seeing more of this fabulous awesome plot, story, character interpretation etc USUK
Also, good luck in university :3
Yanelle chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
oh gosh, love it! :3

I was actually so tempted to imagine Peter as their future son... :3
alguien22792 chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
Ohhhh damn, I really REALLY thought Alfred was dead xD
Anyway! I'm glad you finished this story, it was amazing!
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