Daria made me laugh so hard i cried a bit

I love kuruna! It so great to see a story about her. XD

That was good, but I agree with the rushing towards the end, their could have been more diolauge between the two and Kuruna trying to talk some sense into him, but none the less, good.

This is good, but the ending was pretty rushed, I almost couldn't catch it. And I think that you need to add some more detailed description of the scenes, this story seem to be quite rushed.

But the good thing is that this is a Kuruna fic. Nobody ever writes a fic about her, poor thing. And I see no spelling and grammar mistakes, that's good -

-Kelina Dawn Hearan