This was phenoumanal! I loved the story so much and your writing is incredible. You do such a good job portraying their relationship and your use of adjectives brought the story to life :)

Oh, my, gosh. They are sooo endearing. This was so sweet, it's sickening. In a good way.

I love how you write. You obviously put a lot of thought into this, and it shows in your writing. Your story didn't contain any of the common spelling mistakes I often see in Fanfiction, and you style flowed. I loved it. You've got talent.

Wonderful story! It was a great read, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thank you

Wow! That was so great! I love your characterization of both, Peter and Edmund, and the intensity of the story! Perfect! Thanks for sharing:)

That was amazing! I loved it!

You know, I never really thought about comparing Edmund to Snow White but when you think about it makes sense, sorta, 'cept for the eyes... Dark hair, red lips and pale snowy complexions! LOL, nice story btw...

The first thing I have to say is that I'm happy I'm not the only one who constantly compares Edmund to Snow White. the second thing is...Gee, I can't even begin to describe how beautiful this is. I wanna hug them both and cry TT Great job :3

Great one shot I really enjoyed readying it.

Amazing story!

I love Edmund angst and then Peter making everything better. :)

Brilliant story!

Awww, this is so cute!

I just love how Edmund ran into the ran and Peter chased after him and had a huge heart-to- heart. Ohhh, the sentiment in here is just lovely.

The part where Peter picked up Edmund and Edmund being surprised that Peter can do that was absolutely adorable!

I love it!

Keep up the amazing work!

As much as I adore what you did with this story, I must say I'm disappointed in it as well. I thought you were going to keep going with Ed being ill, as I don't find it very realistic for him to have such a vivid hallucination like that, PLUS an extended conversation in the rain after being described as exhausted and feverish, and then be NOT sick. And/or maybe something more sinister with his scar hurting would have made sense.

This brought tears to my eyes...so many times. O.o so hard for fanfic to do that too. Beautiful.

Oh my goodness. I cannot express how incredible this story is. There's so much love and complexity in it, and I just love it. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more of your fics. This story will be in my head for a long time to come. Thank you so much!

I love this story. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Edmund and Peter brotherfic's are some of my favorites, and this one ii so well done! :)

-Clio Presley

awww so cute at the end. it's really obvious that Edmund loves his family and his nightmares are terrifying him because he loves them