I'm sitting here crying as I type this... I could post something lengthy to tell you how emotional, gripping and wonderful this is, but somehow the words won't come out. This is amazing, I can't believe you don't have hundreds of reviews by now. It reminds me of when they were dealing with that oddly-colored Metagross and they both believed, quite contently, that they were going to die together. Like they knew it was meant to be, and looked forward to meeting again in their afterlife. But better this way, as you've written it, after leading a full and happy life together. You have great talent, and I applaud you!

So well done. Dying together. Just beautiful.

dear god. This was so sad, and very well written! I adored reading it, and loved the plot. Very few stories bring me to tears, *smiles.

Nicely done!

AF

wow im speechless

Beautiful. There are few stories that have made me cry like this, but you have succeeded. Wow. You wrote the introversion very well. Beautiful job. Keep writing!

Amazing. I know it's been a while since you wrote this, but I just had to say that this story was the best thing I've ever seen on this site. You developed the characters wonderfully, and the ending was so sad... simply wonderful, and far outside the scope of a usual Pokemon fic. Thank you for writing it!

This story is one of my favourites. It's original, moving and full of feeling.

I read this ages ago at the Pokemon Tower, and added a link to it to my favourites on my web site. I remember crying then when I read it then, but this time, man, I was balling my eyes out. You really know how to write.

You know I can't believe how long ago you wrote this and you're still getting reviews. I guess that makes this story a classic! I wish you wrote more Pokefics.

AMAZING! I almost cried! You are a very talented writer.

I used to think all the Pokemon fanfictions where just lengthy OC adventures, unfinished quests, and badly layed out cliches.

Then I found this.

Oh my god. You are amazing, to say the least. I never even imagined the Rockets having this much depth and reality to them, but you've taken these bumbling fools and made them real. Thank you.

You probably think this is an absolutely horrible story (I think the same of everything I write) but I'd like you to know that I'm having to blink back tears here.

It figures that the first Pokemon fic I read in years is one as well-written and heart-wrenching as this. It just figures.

Wow its pokemon written for, like…BRAINS.

My god... this... is... so... touching...

I realize it's been some five years since you wrote this, but having just read it for the first time, I felt it entirely nessasary to review. I have never read any Pokemon fanfics, and have never desired to do so, but if there are more like yours, I will start now. This is one of the most touching fanfics I have ever read, for any genre. You have taken these one-sided characters and made them whole and real; you have moved them past their petty plotlines and given them lives. It is a beautiful story. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for putting this on the web.

*sniffle* I hardly ever bother with Pokemon fics, but I'm glad I read this one. It was just beautiful.

So Awesomely cool! very long, But perfectly balanced and executed!