Lovely

lovely

Awwww. thank you for such lovely writing

amazing! :)

I love this even more than the companion piece. Seriously, you have captured his point of view /so well/, especially during the party scene - the constricted throat, the many reasons for his pointless ramble, and how AWKWARD everything feels. Even him, especially him. And that's a very good thing. He had /better/ have the decency to feel awkward after all that he said, am I right?

Also, I'm very glad that a) he's resolved to be nice to her, and that b) the aftershave was a success. I will now proceed to read more of your fanfiction.

I like this. I haven't decided whether I ship them or not, but I do want Sherlock to be a better friend to Molly no matter what.

and that's why he didn't say a single word when he met Tom! hahaha well done, love it!

Makes me feel better after reading every time...oh, Sherlock. Do keep to your resolution.

I love how well this fits in tone and structure with the other piece but it's uniquely Sherlock, and how the timetable is the incident and after, instead of the incident and before. My favorite parts are the hint of jealousy in his motivation and his reaction to the weird murder :)

"And then his text alert sounds, loud and clear, after he thought he could sink no lower into this cesspool of embarrassment."
Now I remember why I laughed when I read the last line in 'Every Time.' His text tone was that orgasm noise! I forgot but my subconscious obviously didn't!

I like his New Year's resolution :D
And he seemed to have kept it as far as I got into the series!

Just gonna let you know that I almost died realising that this one was from Sherl's perspective. Okay, now to read.

Oh, thank Gallifrey. That resolution is perfect. I mean, there's no way he'll be able to keep it, but he does a fairly good job in Series Three. Well, for Sherlock.

"You're a star" OH SHERLOCK *throws self at Sherlock*

Things I did while reading this:

Squealed. A lot.
Chewed/sucked on my water bottle because I couldn't contain my noise or feelings.
Hugged myself tightly.
Rocked back and forth.
Grinned. A lot.

All of these are physical signs that I was very emotionally invested and taken up in this fanfiction. It effected me much like the show effects me, which is high praise indeed.

I love the bits about the woman. I feel you acknowledged that she was important, but, in the long run, not as important as Molly.

And he wore the aftershave. OMG. I'm dead.

That was the most awesome fanfic ever. I loved that so much!

He appreciates the mutilated bodies she has given him more than the aftershave. ROFL! I can very well imagine how Molly's heart must have skipped several beats when she smelled than aftershave on him.

I love a happy ending- so sweet.

Yay Sherlock! Live your dream! Don't hurt Molly anymore!