This was very beautiful! I like real!Jack's interpretation of things here a lot.

NOPE. NOPE. I SHALL NOT CRY. I SHALL NOT- OH DANG IT *gross sobbing*

Aww! This is such a beautiful fanfic.

always makes me cry . . .

Simply lovely!

Aaahhhh! *Fangirls to the extreme while crying* This
Was
Amazing!
Oh, Jack...
It doesn't help that i JUST watched this episode...

Dear Lady of Sandwiches:

Oh, this is beautiful. And I commend you for using the name Jack adopted during this meeting; most others do not. You've done an amazing job with both characters and this scene, a wondrous take. As well, your spelling and grammar is definitely much better than most of what's found here.
The expression of sadness throughout is done wonderfully, and I love the real Jack's thought line. But truly, what else could they see 'James' and Tosh as? For that time period especially.
You did amazingly.

Sincerely,
Master of the Hellish Yard

Perfect. Absolutly perfect.
-Dyslexic Nerd

I normally don't like fics like this (scenes that were in the show, just written differently) but this was beautiful. I loved it.

This was beautiful. I'm so sad that there hasn't been more written for the real Jack Harkness, but this piece was a very nice one. I'm so glad you wrote it. Thank you.

this was beautiful, it captured the mood and emotion of the scene so well, thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Oh, that was so sad and so beautiful! So delicately written with wonderful emotion and insight into real!Jack's thoughs and feelings. You interpeited the scene so well! 3

This was absolutely brilliant. I love all the emotion you put into this story. It's so amazing and wonderful and just so, so lovely.

u should add a chapter where jack II sees jack I again ( i no that's not how it happened but.. it is fanfic) and a chap about how Jack I's men react 2 his being gay.

Beautiful and absolutely brilliant. One of the best fics I have ever read based on this episode. Thank you for uploading.