that is good. update soon please.

For me, this story is nice and interesting. I don't see any problem with the naming. Mailing is how exactly I pronounced it. Go and write what you want, author. Just let them deal with it. No worries. ;) others even spelled Syaoran, Shaoran or Shaolan or use his Xiaolang name instead of Syaoran even it doesn't even exist in anime. :)

Hi. I think you have an interesting idea of a story but you need to spend a bit more time reviewing your writing. Violet is a shade of purple. Violate means to touch someone inappropriately without permission.
Meiling is a character from CLAMP. Mailing means putting a letter in the mail.
Please read your stories out loud before you post. If English isn’t your first language then have other people review your work.
POV stands for point of view. There is first, second, and third person POV. “Normal” isn’t a POV.
Flush out your story with details. You want to paint a picture with words. Right now your story sounds more like a girl telling her friend the story while they are shopping.
Keep reading more stories for inspiration and keep writing.

im in love with this story already! Sakura is so badass but i've been wondering why there is only 2 chapters... by the way i just wanted to mention thats not how you spell Meiling name... anyways its a wonderful story and i hipe i get to read the rest of it

~*pika*~

Interesting chapter, can't believe he wasn't a little more pissed that she bet him to the shadows

Aww hope Nadeshiko isn't to hard on syoaran , Looking forward to see what happens now !?

Can't wait to see if syoaran let's her go!

HA ha , That Was Great ! Looking Forword To See How Their Little Talk Goes !

make more!

I really like the story cant wait for next chapter!

PLZ UPDATE! AND SOON TOO !

Excuse me, her name is MEILING, not MAILING. Mailing the act of sending a mail to someone and is not a name!

Nice lol! Keep updating!

O_o wow nice job on this story :)

omg are saku and syao going to be found out by them?

cant wait for you to upload more :D well done x

Yay~! You updated! :) :) :) (:)) SＯ ＨＡＰＰＹ！！！！