I feel like you should add another chapter. It was good but I think it would've been even better if you continued it, it kinda felt like it ended just when it started.. :)

I really really really enjoyed this and it was very good, but you left me wanting more lol.

lovely story, wish there was more :)

This is just so.. brilliantly brilliant and moving and... well, perfect.
Its absolutely perfect in every way.
And i'm so sad its complete,' cus i want it to go on and on forever.

:D:D:D Beautiful! The whole story was really nice and fun to read! BUT now i am sad its over :( It was really funny and your writing is very good.

No! Don't say it's complete! I want to know what happens next! This is brilliant. You make it possible to really feel for the characters. That's all I'm going to say. I love it.

Your reviewer,
Charlotte.

I've been meaning to read this fic for ages and I'm so glad I did. You handled the themes in it and Arthurs portrayal really well

I really don't like Merlin with Gwaine in that way. I prefer Merlin with Arthur.

This is a really brilliant story and I'm surprised it has so few reviews! I really enjoyed it and would to see something else in this verse.

wow i really like this story, the plot so far is great! :)

please continue soon!

You are seriously one of the most under appreciated authors on this site.

You have such shitty review numbers in comparison to the quality and diversity of your work.

And that's just a general estimation of your work - this story was absolutely superb. There's some part of this piece that has taken and captured reality and translated it through an ultimately lifeless mess of symbols (written word). And that's amazing.

Proper grammar, vocabular, and fluid diction - these are all things one can learn (and everyone should). But you can't learn how to write life into a story and give it to the reader. That is something one is either born with or without. You were born with it.

I love Arthur, I love Merlin, I even love Morgana. They all make me so happy and thrilled and delighted and other positive words.

I super hope this isn't over yet.

I really cannot think of much to criticize. You've written a colourful array of engaging, vivid characters in a strong, drawing story and I loved every minute of it - the good, the bad, and the gay (especially the gay).

The sex was great, too. Great sex in a good story can be hard to find, believe it or not. But you never once sacrifice one for the other. You let everything come together in its own time and thoroughly mind fucked me once the time came.

It was all just so amazing.

You made me fall in love with this story and, considering how picky and jaded I am, that is a hard thing to do.

Keep writing, this or anything else, and I will follow you anywhere.

~aeromance

Just wanted to say I was actually eating macaroni and broccoli pasta (without the onions) while reading this... I found this hilarious, so much so, that when I realized I was eating nearly the same thing I choked on my pasta cuz I started laughing so hard

Oh my gosh! I love you so much right now! There are no words to describe my happiness after reading your story!

So incredibly sexy...thx..gr

So cute. Watching an emotional reject grow into an adult! thx..gr