Reviews for A COLA'S tale: An orb took my friend Chapter 2 |
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Marc Uplake chapter 1 . 1/17/2016 Why did you stop the story line? I like this one very, very much. I know you wrote this story about 3,5 years ago but it's genious! Please continue! |
Guest chapter 11 . 10/23/2013 Do you know where this is going? Good job so far. Please continue |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/23/2013 Exiting... |
ValkyrieVeela chapter 11 . 5/5/2013 Little bit fast-paced. I wouldn't have dived straight in, I would have led up to the mystery itself a bit more after settling her in. By the way, when they're telling Georgia about the True Eleven they don't mention Clive and his presence at COLA Club; surely that would be as much of a key thing to know at Fenton Lodge as any thing else chronicled in 'The Shapeshifter'? |
x-ema-x chapter 11 . 3/22/2012 CANTWAITFORTHENEXTCHAPTER!ISwearI'llUpdateSoon PROMISE! |
x-ema-x chapter 6 . 1/22/2012 love ove love ittt! im guessing the next chapter will be called 'brace for impact' ? but how is he the ONLY cola to have got a vision about that? i mean seriously 1 out of 170 odd colas? im amzed Lisa didnt pick it up cant wait 4 the nxt:P |
x-ema-x chapter 5 . 1/22/2012 Wowzaz! I love it! Do cola-ish! Theres new shapeshifters too! Awesome! |
x-ema-x chapter 4 . 1/20/2012 :) Can't wait for the next one! |
x-ema-x chapter 3 . 1/17/2012 FANTABULISTIC! Now its getting all cola-ey This I'd the only fic I remember that it says the bit before they come AND the first one to have a slightly more common ability, rather than shapeshifting or pyrotechnic-ness or another Rome with no name P.s. Thanx for the PM love them! P.p.s. Keep up the good work! |
x-ema-x chapter 2 . 1/13/2012 Love it!how oftten do you update? can't wait whenever it is:PPP great story!3 |
x-ema-x chapter 1 . 1/13/2012 AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!LOVE ITTTTTTTT! coooool telekinetic:PPPP isnt the sound of taps turning on in your head then passing out the sign of a shapeshifter as well? |