Reviews for song returns
msteresa87 chapter 1 . 11/9/2018
There's little to no punctuation. The idea behind the story is good.
mass chapter 2 . 4/14/2016
you could use a little grammar.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
For your description I could have forgiven the wrong use of too as to or to as too. But fucking two as to, how do you fuck that up?
TheCheshireCat01 chapter 15 . 1/17/2016
Can't wait for more chapters :)
Donavan chapter 14 . 1/10/2015
Come on man it's not too late to update. ;)
nurek chapter 4 . 11/19/2014
Good chapter
Anonimous chapter 14 . 5/31/2014
Man you should continue this story
jose .e chapter 14 . 4/26/2014
please come back soon!
killer43penguin chapter 14 . 4/15/2014
I love this story. But i hate waiting for the next chapter. Please dont let a fan go without another chapter.
Guest chapter 14 . 3/15/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter
Antrxx chapter 14 . 2/10/2014
It's good to have you back.

You still need to work on capitalizing your "i" but apart from that it's looking good.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
guest chapter 14 . 1/22/2014
whens the next one i cant wait :D a real page turner :D
GrimReaper chapter 14 . 1/22/2014
Thanks, for making a new chapter and continuing this story can't wait for it to come out. Oh and by the way I hope your up for constructive criticism, every story I have read no one seems to read over their story and fix their mistakes, if you did this your stories would be even better.
IPON3 chapter 14 . 1/16/2014
OMG ur back...yes...this story is gana be finished ..
SmilesThroughFandoms chapter 14 . 1/16/2014
Great job!
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