Reviews for song returns |
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msteresa87 chapter 1 . 11/9/2018 There's little to no punctuation. The idea behind the story is good. |
mass chapter 2 . 4/14/2016 you could use a little grammar. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2016 For your description I could have forgiven the wrong use of too as to or to as too. But fucking two as to, how do you fuck that up? |
TheCheshireCat01 chapter 15 . 1/17/2016 Can't wait for more chapters :) |
Donavan chapter 14 . 1/10/2015 Come on man it's not too late to update. ;) |
nurek chapter 4 . 11/19/2014 Good chapter |
Anonimous chapter 14 . 5/31/2014 Man you should continue this story |
jose .e chapter 14 . 4/26/2014 please come back soon! |
killer43penguin chapter 14 . 4/15/2014 I love this story. But i hate waiting for the next chapter. Please dont let a fan go without another chapter. |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/15/2014 Can't wait for the next chapter |
Antrxx chapter 14 . 2/10/2014 It's good to have you back. You still need to work on capitalizing your "i" but apart from that it's looking good. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
guest chapter 14 . 1/22/2014 whens the next one i cant wait :D a real page turner :D |
GrimReaper chapter 14 . 1/22/2014 Thanks, for making a new chapter and continuing this story can't wait for it to come out. Oh and by the way I hope your up for constructive criticism, every story I have read no one seems to read over their story and fix their mistakes, if you did this your stories would be even better. |
IPON3 chapter 14 . 1/16/2014 OMG ur back...yes...this story is gana be finished .. |
SmilesThroughFandoms chapter 14 . 1/16/2014 Great job! |