This was such a funny chapter and refreshing to read chrona in a jelous and defensive light. Also this chapter showed a lot of the characters development of chrona becoming more confident and less self doubtful that I feel you've been slowly working twords from the start of this fic. So happy I found this lovely fic can't wait to finish it.

Aw I think this one is my favorite

I love your story’s, their so funny and interesting. Can you do one in Maka’s point of view. And I know that you did a beach one already, but I’m trying to find one when Crona see Maka in her swimsuit and doesn't know how to deal with it. I’ll really appreciate it if you can do either one of those. Thank you!

Just finished reading the first chapter and wow, to say you nailed the characterisation would be an understatement. It was also very fun to read _ i'm looking forward to the rest of this!

Nice to see you back on here. This was a fun chapter, and I'm looking forward to what's coming next!

Awesome chapter!

Great return. Very amusing. Who knew Crona had it in him? XD Can't wait for more coolness from you :) I've also got some new stuff you might be interested in, if you have the time.

40 left great job so far all have been great

Update please chaper 11!

Good chapter. Nice to see some action in your stories, for a change, not that I mind fluff at all, it's just nice to know you can do action stuff. Hope to see more from you :)

Ha, I thought this was going to be a much darker chapter, but pleasantly surprised at the direction you took. It's always nice seeing an update from you.

i really love this , i hope there will be more

I really loved it :3

Especially the story with Crona and Blair it was cute how he played with her. And the jealousy part of the last story reminded me that had the same "problem" xD anyways great work and please continue :D

really enjoyed the storys so far hope theres more soon

I picture chrona as a boy. So in this chapter, I was like lol! XD Keep up the cool work!