omg, I love the hammer gag!

Great story! I loved the plot, it was very unique. As for the lemon, I think this is the first one I have read that did not mention breasts. It was interesting.

oh my god you're a brilliant writer. I've already said this but I just love the metaphors you use and this story flows so beautifully I'm almost upset it's about to end

god I love the quality of writing. it's rare to find on FanFiction your figurative language is great and quite hilarious. Can't wait to continue reading this fic.

Wow, that was the most beautifully crafted smut I've ever read, or probably ever will read. Congratulations! I really liked all the internal monologues and character development you had, as well as your fantastic characterization. You really got their feelings down, and brought them to life. This was much deeper than pure lemon, and I'm glad to have stumbled on it.

Haaaaawwwt! But the Bo question was a huge mood-killer! Anyway, I'm in love with this fic

Dear lord... this had me choking-howling almost to the very end! The descriptions were so good that I clearly pictured the whole thing! I couldn't help but to have almost the same reactions as Ren and Yashiro XD (no one can deny that Kyoichi is quite the character, loved him though)

God damn this was amazing, definitely worth a reread. I should have been asleep this whole time but oh well! Literally pulled an allnighter for this one but do I careeeeee NOOOO THIS WAS SO GOOD UGH THANKSSSS FOR SHARING!

This smut was soooo good, I mean obviously they didn't do the whole do but this shit was hot regardless like yes. Seriously this was HOT. When he said where he BELONGED was between her legs?! Goddamn I literally was fanning myself. Also your depictions of kyoko's body against ren and how he pulled her on to him and like finding out she wasnt wearing undies JESUS my heart literally skipped a beat like what like what like WHATTTTTT so good so good so good

Holy fuck, that confession. Literally breathless over here. That whole thing about selling his soul... I had to reread it because it was so smooth and suave and charming and sweet but so true to ren that I was dead. All of this is ACTUAL perfection and I'm not exaggerating a bit like I'm enjoying this SO much like its like I'm happy because my expectations are always set higher and higher when it comes to reading and this is SOMETHING AMZAING AND DIFFERENT AND SO ADDICTING - and definitely set a new standard for me. goddamn I was like OH NICE this thing isn't 3000 chapters long so i can enjoy it and I won't have to dedicate 4 sleepless days to reading it but I'm literally over here wishing it was longer you're so good at this!

You are AH-MAZING. TO SAY THAT I ABSOLUTELY ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER AND YOUR STYLE OF WRITiNG WOULD BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT OF THE HIGHEST DEGREE. WHOA wow whoa wow wow whoa wowie wow wow. I loved reading this so much it's unbelievable. Seriously, I've read so much fanfiction it's cray but I can honestly say that this is one of the works that makes me think - damn I'm literally reading the manga here. Like seriously!? This is like reading REn's POV and I'm like imaging the art to go with it and everything. That's how good and in character and interesting this was. Honestly, great great job and I'm so excited to keep reading. Thanks so much for sharing !

AHAHAHAHA HAAAAAA THE HAMMER CONVERSATION

REN'S INTERNAL MONOLOGUE IS A JOY TO BEHOLD

Read Kyoko's Dream Journal first and was broken-hearted to see that it wasn't complete. Then I saw this one and jumped for joy because after only reading 2 chapters I was madly in love with your style of writing. I am truly amazed at how consistently awesome your writing turned out to be. Seriously, never quit writing fanfiction and preferably stick with Skip Beat because 'WWWOOOWWWW!' This is a prime example of a perfect fanfiction. The love/fluff suffocated me (in the best way) while the angst/need yanked and pulled at my heartstrings (also in the best way) and the passion/lust enveloped and attacked my senses (only in the best way). I can't wait to send the link to my cousin who also loves Skip Beat (thanks to me), this story will destroy her (always in the best way). Please continue writing; I need more stories from my new fave fanfic writer!

Thank you very much for writing this story, it was fantastic!

AWESOME. Just AWESOME.