Reviews for Forbidden Best Friend
MiniAichii chapter 4 . 9/4/2018
I honestly didn't think that Deidara would be Naru's brother. xD And I still think Itachi and Naruto's bestfriend thing are sooo adoraaable. I hope I could find more stories like that. I shipped them as friends.

Sadly, and truthfully, good things do comes an end. Like this one. *sigh. But then I really enjoyed it. Well written fics always turns me on. This is definitely a must read. Not too long, not to short but oozing with love. (and cute smuts)

Thank you for sharing. Lots of love.
MiniAichii chapter 3 . 9/4/2018
Oh the joy of life when you realized that you just found a gem. The smut can be much described as love-making (or love-conveying? haha) Those confessions while making out makes it a goooood read. A perfect lemon I always prefer. The awkwardness at the beginning makes the feels real. I've fallen in love again. *sniffs

I just felt bad for Itachi tho, losing his bestfriend to his lil bro. Hahaha. And when he walks up to them after their little time made me cringe and bite my lips but at the same time it was fun. But then again, those awkward fluttery feels and Sasu and Naru's built love makes this fic one of the best.

I always prefer slowly built love like started as childhood friends rather than those I love you after knowing you for 3 days kind. Tho there are still good stories like that.
MiniAichii chapter 2 . 9/3/2018
Ohhh. I like where it is going and the idea of Itachi being best of friends with Naru are so adorable. xD I'm just having a hard time accepting the thing about Shikamaru being gay for Sasuke. xD I am a Shika fan and I'm always used to him being the lazy friend you usually ask about no-side opinions and him just watching clouds.
MiniAichii chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Oh Kami! At laaaast Something that made me riled up. Something so goooood that it can make my heart speed up beating and makes me wanna shout, giggle and fan girl much. What a really good start.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/15/2018
I LOVE SAPPY HAPPY ENDINGS
Wfest chapter 4 . 9/19/2017
I loved that idea of Naruto's big brother and getting back at Itachi. It's a well written story with great humor.
freckledizuku chapter 4 . 3/28/2017
This was great, although i like NaruSasu a bit more.. i still like SasuNaru and this was amazing c:
Tuesday'sHere chapter 4 . 10/2/2016
It was a perfectly sappy ending but it was a beautiful sappy ending! I love sappy endings almost as much as I love beautiful big brother Itachi! He might be a bit sadistic and love torturing his little brother but Itachi is the best big brother ever! Always making sure Sasuke is well loved and cared for, yay! Enjoyed this story and the smut was lovely, thank you for writing it and sharing it!
InkDragons chapter 4 . 7/21/2016
This story was great. I loved the character depictions and how you wrote their relationships in a unique way while still keeping them in character. This is the first story I've read that I can remember where Naruto was Itachi's best friend to start with. You did it very well. I loved the part when Deidara walks in. Yay for Uchihas having the same type!
yuri plisetsky chapter 2 . 5/10/2016
"All right, fine. I'll make out with you." *smirk* just admit it you're jealous Naru-chan.. God I love tsundere Naruto xD
AlyssaOtaku69 chapter 4 . 4/21/2016
That was a good story and I love your ending.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/25/2015
CUTE & COLL, LOVING IT!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2015
So so cute and...I LOVE it!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/9/2015
The good: I liked that the fic didn't use disgusting seme and uke tropes. There was nothing that indicated which character would play which role based on their behavior or the way you described them. Naruto was large, strong, muscular, and sexually aggressive, definitely not a typical uke. Sasuke was the top, but he was a little more nervous about the sex than Naruto and enjoyed it when Naruto would dominate their kisses, definitely not a typical seme. Top/bottom order was decided, as it should be, on their individual sexual preferences, not on which one was more "feminine."

The bad: I know you wrote an ItaDei spinoff, but I totally hated that you forced in the last-minute ItaDei in this fic. I hate, loathe, and despise "pair the spares" tropes and that's exactly what this was. Itachi didn't need a pairing, and if you were going to give him one, it shouldn't have been last-minute OR an identical copy of the one in this fic. That Sasuke might be torturing Itachi in the same way that Itachi tortured him isn't a funny enough joke to justify using such a second-rate cliche. It would have been better to save the ItaDei entirely for the spinoff and not put it into this fic at all.

I didn't really see a point to the epilogue except to force in the ItaDei and one more sex scene. Otherwise, I don't think the epilogue added a thing to the fic. Overall, the third chapter was a stronger conclusion to the fic than this fourth chapter. So I have some mixed feelings about this fic.
Daemonia Azrael Di Oz chapter 4 . 3/7/2015
Yeah ! I love it !
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