| Reviews for the kiss |
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   bikelock28 chapter 4 . 6/15/2018 Bloody love this chapter. One of my favourite 11 scenes and you capture it brilliantly and heartbreakingly. You have a really good grasp on their timeline and who remembers what from when. I especially liked, "He's just being the biggest flirt. He's horrible at it"- all of that little exchange where River thinks he's having her on and then realises he isn't was fantastic. |
| Hallolo chapter 5 . 2/1/2014 Hello! I love your work and your style, and how you write River and the Doctor and get their voices right everytime. I love that the Doctor is repeating what River said on Asgard in your picnic story, nice touch! Thank you so much for writing! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2012 Okay I'm dead. This story officially killed me. Beautiful. Just perfect. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2012 Yes! Also brilliantly written |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/2/2012 This is gorgeous. I must've seen the day of the moon like five times by now so I've seen the kiss scene that many times and you made it all new and shiny again. Plus SO MUCH EXTRA DEPTH. Loved the computer analogy. |
| Kerjen chapter 3 . 9/27/2012 My god, this is so powerful and beautiful |
| Winged Time Wolf Ravenclaw chapter 5 . 9/26/2012 Aw, that's so cute! |
| Trinkster chapter 3 . 7/30/2012 ... I'm vaguely starting to wonder if this will turn into my Doctor Who OTP. Actually, it's more like wondering /when/ this will turn into my Doctor Who OTP. I'm starting to think that it's all going to be inevitable. |
| Trinkster chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 Wow wow... wow. Oh Madis. The descriptions were absolutely perfect in this. You've captured the eleventh doctor perfectly. You've even got how his brain works down to a t - the repetition of a single word worked great (such as the "and and and"), and the description of how the timelord brain is fantastic at multi-tasking (or shall i say multi-processing). Now I am very excited to read the other chapters. All about their kisses I presume, oh GOODIE. |
| SunnyZim chapter 5 . 6/10/2012 This was beautiful. So so heart-breaking but beautiful. I do so hope we see more of River (apart from just ep 5) in the new season and more of her relationship with the Doctor because I love them together;-) |
| cmartlover chapter 5 . 6/8/2012 That chapter was absolutely beautiful. |
| cmartlover chapter 2 . 6/8/2012 That was very touching. |
| cmartlover chapter 1 . 6/7/2012 Beautifully written! You captured the Doctor's emotions so well. I'm looking foward to reading the rest of this story. |
| tardisbluephoenix chapter 1 . 5/17/2012 Holy moley chapter one! It's amazing. You characterise the Doctor SO WELL! Wow! It's brilliant. Truly, brilliant! Ahhh! |
| Citizenofwhoville123 chapter 5 . 5/14/2012 This was very sweet! Good job! :) |
