This chapter in particular is my FAVORITE. It breaks my heart when Roxas cries (NO ONE hurts my baby) and when he leans his head down on Xem (he just misses his daaaaaaaad) but my FAVORITE part is like the last sentence when Xem calls Roxas his youngest son and Axel his eldest and i just :sobs: so wonderful. so wonderful. Thank you for writing this so much.

Wishing you the best and hoping you’re enjoying KH3

It is adorable, of course. That woman in the cafe was a huge prick for reacting that way, though...

My gosh so many important yhinggs in this chapter. I can't touch on them all even. Fantastic beyond belief.

...this is seriously one of the greatest things I have read from you. Even better than the other example situations of how Axel discovered Saix's phobia. The ending in particular I enjoyed, as Axel was able to bring the joy back to everyone and not have it be ruined for Xion.

A sad, nice story. I like the bonding and learning.

I like seeing little Saix's ideas regarding his mother. Your explanations in the Author's Note were most intriguing as well.

Ah, a cute chapter. Very excellent,

Again, more useful notes from Xion's perspective

I enjoyed Cion's perspective very much. Aided in detailing things, including interpretation of Speech

I am terribly pleased with the amount of ways you've explained this situation now. I really do like the different perspectives. It was important to fully understand the depth of the situation.

All I csn envision is Cion and Roxas of this age cheering and saying "yay!" To this whole chapter.

Glad to finally learn of the early years of their family, including the long mystery of Saix's mother. Also I liked hearing Shielding being mentioned, even if Axel didn't understand completely. Since reading the explanation of Saix's power progression this makes sense and is good to hear of.

...um. Okay

So I have found the beginning.

Excellent in most every way

Wait what did Saix's grandfather try to do?

PLEASE, use Xehanort More!