... It's like Everytime Naruto thinks about quitting he is brainwashed into continueing.

Love it thus far wish there was more

continue please

Plzzzz continue

The "teleport" power too.. Why doesn't naruto just send mizuki HIGH ABOVE the village? (he's SEEN it from the top of the hokage mountain, so he CAN "port" there) Snap his neck or BREAK his leg with a LOOK.. He should be able too (heck he should be able to "call the femur OUT of the leg and TOO him if he wants).

Even an ability as "softcore" as flight. CAN be used OFFENSIVELY... If he grabs someone, goes up about 3,000 feet(or less, 100 is pretty much DEATH even with "ninja moves". that's "terminal velocity" ) and then DROPS them!

Again "ninjutsu SSS, Taijutsu whatever, genjutsu none... He can RESHAPE REALITY to whatever he feels/wishes at the time, Do not engage, FLEE ON SIGHT!, numbers mean NOTHING and no weapons can be brought to bear, if encountering him, you have already LOST!" That should KINDA be his bingo book entry.

The wizard angle is good, I do like that one a lot, but the sheer POWER you gave him in the first two chapters just needs "filled out" it's already "do anything" button... I think naruto would make a MUCH better wizard, mage or even jedi/sith knight or ESPER.. His powers tend to "lean" more to those, The "ninja school" he more or less LEARNS NOTHING, he develops his character NOT at all and without the comedy and "UNEXPECTED" powers, it never would have lasted (no series based JUST on martial arts lasts.. they are DULL)

JUST the transforming powers, should give naruto the elements of: fire, ice, lightning, poisons, acid, and lava.. JUST there... (kinda easily instead of creating simulacrums of life). The first three are OBVIOUS the next is just turning air or WHATEVER into whatever is deadly/hallucinogenic/incapacitating, acid and lava are kind the same but the latter would require a solid first. (really shouldn't he have LEARNED HOW TO DO ALL THIS ALREADY with the library trips with the clones? If he's already "creating" "people" and making "complex machines" the massage chair?)

Konoha made to FATAL FLAWS to a plan that's worked up until then, for EVERY village, that I can't see who they "helped"... #1 The jinchuriki's identity is supposed to be kept SECRET, as in nobody from other villages can target them (that went out the window with the hokage's DIPSHIT idea of telling civilians)... #2.. The jinchuriki is supposed to come from the "ruling clan/class" to give him/her a since of loyalty and belonging to the village they are supposed to protect... ALSO out the window, when the BONEHEADED third doesn't remember to release that part and all minato's "friends" are too STUPID to put it together!

So just for RECAP.. The third has exposed naruto to EVERY possible enemy of the bijuu and EVERY SINGLE "collector" in the elemental nations, but DENIED him any possible reason to stay loyal or ANY ALLIES against problem... "FOR HIS OWN GOOD"... Does that sound sane AT ALL?

Never understood the viability of team suicide (I mean team seven).. I mean look at it, two HEAVY hitters (even if naruto was an idiot, by sheer being a jinchuriki he's a HEAVY)... and then all the OTHER teams being kinda UNDERPOWERED.. It never made sense... (last one with the best KINDA makes sense AS LONG AS THE last one isn't SHROUDED in so many secrets as to choke a horse, like naruto).. Then it's just DUMB... Putting kiba with sasuke? MAKES much more sense... He's an IDIOT.. A REAL, DYED in the wool, IDIOT.. and he's got pack mentality (which not only SHOULD get them through the whole "bell test" but SHOULD infuse so sort of "get along" together mentality)... Sakura? Yeah I can kinda see this one with sasuke too, simply because it's the whole "big fish in a little pond, suddenly being a MINNOW in an ocean" mentality... But Naruto? Since the day he was BORN he's more or less been "swimming with sharks" with as many secrets around him... and people out to get him (a clanless bookworm and a self-entitled idiot isn't gonna make the cut here).

Why wpuld the gun require LIGHTING CHAKRA? Just use magic to create lightning (exactly like he did the fireballs) it's kinda the SECOND staple of ALL wizards (fireballs and lightning-bolts). NO elemental chakra should be beyond him, or even particularly DIFFICULT for him now! And why chakra bullets? Couldn't he just "CREATE" the bullets to fire out of the gun out of nothing?! I think you need to DROP the whole "needs x chakra" because that makes NO SENSE at this point! Seems like it CAUSES more problems with this story then it actually fixes. As it creates some fairly GIGANTIC plot holes! (isn't his abilities limited by his IMAGINATION? Well that seems to be getting WORSE as time goes on). (oh and you ALREADY forgot about "invisibility", that he used LAST CHAPTER!) It was a good start, but it seems to be getting caught up on a LOT OF cliche's that cause problems for this genre/series.

"overspecializing in his natural abilities"... It's not exactly "overspecializing".. He can transform anything to anything else, create ANYTHING, do all elements attacks, turn invisible, has telekinesis and can TELEPORT.. That's kinda ALL OVER THE PLACE. No REAL reason to learn jutsu actually, not if he's already bending and twisting reality itself with just thoughts. the hyuuga and the uchiha's EYES? Now that's OVERSPECIALIZING... the whole "snake fetish" thing? That is ALSO "overspecializing". (and yet everybody still DOES it, show me ONE thing that the kagyura kid could do, that had NOTHING to do with bones.).

I don't really see the NEED to hide his abilities, I mean it's GOING to come out, so what's really the point? Either he goes from "zero to b.a. instantly and nobody buys it, or thinks it's a 'TRICK'" or everyone thinks he's been lying to them for years (neither of which, go over very well), (really the same COULD be said of his "heritage".. All these secrets that have "expiration dates" are KINDA DUMB) I don't say "show off" but also, no need to hide either. Just quit giving a fig about what ANYONE wants to know. VERY EASY... You think anyone from the other clans really CARE what's said about them? (read: aburame)

As I said, lackluster, abysmal "learning". He should have ALREADY read all this, and it's kinda POINTLESS just to learn history, (after all, it's NOT going to help in a fight) But then again the academy isn't REALLY about making them good "warriors", it's more about just them WASTING TIME until they get old enough too DO ANYTHING. I mean there really ISN'T anything for them to be doing, there are no real computers, or games or such to kill time doing, and if they all trained and powered up in the school, then all of them would be pretty strong RIGHT out of the gate. But it pretty much is HORRIBLY sorry "training", especially for bloodline users.. (since they never even TOUCH on them) and it doesn't even teach tactics or battle strategies (you can kinda tell, because all through their academic life, they are in competition with one another, then in a 24 hour period, they are supposed to drop all that and work as a team - it's kinda dumb if you think about it logically!) Naruto's manga reading is about using "life force" to do stuff and he thinks it's restrictive? What does he think "chakra" is... It's the EXACT same thing. "mental and physical energy"... AKA "life force". and it's used in his "manga" for EXACTLY what it is used for in the naruto series.

If the kids are SUPPOSED to learn from their senseis and they're own families growing up, then exactly WHAT IS THE POINT of the academy? It's OBVIOUSLY not for training them! It's not for tactics and learning strategies, it's not for physical conditioning (and if they're SUPPOSED to be learning fighting styles at home... Well then that REALLY shoots the need for the academy in the foot)! . That's really my problem with the academy being thought of as "gospel" of the series, if it OFFERS nothing, then WHY GO? Naruto's OBVIOUSLY powerful enough (and well read enough) to be a nin, so just SKIP the academy.(and the hokage isn't gonna let power like that NOT be a nin, no matter how many "laws" have to be torn to shreds! Let alone not deploy the son of the fourth and the jinchuriki too boot). There is no real POINT to it, so just JUMP IT.!(or test out of it, like kakashi and others)

"I've always had your best interests at heart"? Yet another lie! It was NOT in naruto's best interest when the third made that BONEHEADED decision to tell everyone that naruto was the jailer for the kyuubi! NOBODY NEEDED to know that! and the ignorant, sub-human civilians REALLY DIDN'T!

Oh yes, magic is the realm of fantasy, because it's perfectly NORMAL for people to blow fireballs and walk up vertical surfaces, etc...So how is "chakra magic" any more childish then say "dead bone pulse" or "pinewheel eye" or "white eyes". Yeah bloodlines DO pop up outta the blue (how does he think they form anyway?) especially in the uzumaki line, they ALL have "weird powers", (karin's whole bite her to heal thing, kushina's chains... ETC...ETC...)

Why in the WORLD would naruto want to go to the academy, if he can ALREADY bend reality? Isn't that a BIT redundant? The history and everything is pretty much stupid too, considering he's ALREADY read the library! What is he supposed to learn that he hasn't ALREADY?!

"I'm really excited about attending the academy".. For heaven's sake WHY? At BEST it's a lack-luster, abysmal education, surrounded by knuckle-dragging, arrogant fools for classmates(with stupidity overly-inflated and FRAGILE egos) and an OUTRIGHT traitor for a teacher! At WORST, the academy is an UTTER WASTE OF TIME with absolutely NO redeeming qualities!

Needs to register his abilities? FOR THE LOVE OF HEAVEN, why? That doesn't help naruto AT ALL, ninja are supposed to be about SECRETS, not jotting down all their abilities, that's just plain STUPID. It helps NOBODY but the villeins of the story! This is why FF stories ALWAYS make the hero either entirely op or so underpowered it's stupid, because they ALL mark down all the hero can DO.. Ever notice in anime they just pull powers out of NOWHERE and you NEVER know exactly what they can fully do!

I never saw a problem with making characters "too powerful".. I mean by the end of anime we EXPECT them to be GODS! We expect them to pull some "hidden power" outta their asses to win any fight... There really isn't such a thing as "too powerful"... It's a redundant statement only used for FF... They are ALL O.P... It's kinda WHY we watch anime... Just in ffs... They are made powerful EARLIER.