This was a great story! We need more Lokane fics like this!

Why is Jane consistently referred to as Miss Foster while Bruce is Dr. Banner? Jane has a PhD, she should be referred to as Dr. Foster. I know I'd correct anyone who disrespected me like that...

It is kind of annoying me that Jane uses Dr for Banner, but everyone (including him) uses Miss as her title when I'm pretty sure Dr also applies for her. Given that we are not in a setting where everyone ignores it for all others, it feels like she is being disrespected (although Dr Foster immediately makes me think of the limerick, so there is that).

I love this story so much, I couldn't put it down until I finished!

Wow. I absolutely loved reading this story, proven by the fact that I read it all in a day. There was a perfect mixture of suspense, sadness, happines and (of course) sweet Lokane moments : )

You write all the characters really well and I thoroughly enjoyed reading everything right up until the last chapter. I suspect this will be one of the stories I will visit again and again. I love it : )

I think you write well, and I love to support Lokane fic's. Jane and Loki have always been the most obvious couple to me in Thor fandom. But your portrayal of Jane...is so selfish. And silly. Harboring a fugitive so she can benefit herself. And believing she can bargain with a terrorist...to benefit herself. And...its all about her. 3 chapters in and I can't stand the main character. I can't make myself finish it.

I read all the chapters in one night. This story is amazing, this is a huge experience beyond every expectation. Wow. I am speechless. I don't like the Avengers universe, but this time I found it very interesting and intriguing. In particular, the masterpiece of yours was the delicate description of the relationship between Jane and Thor (the idealization of Jane and also that naivete typical of men were stunning), and between Loki and Jane. Personally I felt very moved at some points, where the mutual friendship and respect become stronger and stronger until both of them realize that something happened.
So, Thank you so much, thank you for sharing your precious ideas, thank you for letting me in in this beautiful world.

Like Thor he probably added , "Oh shit, this is Earth isn't it..."
I kept thinking, Jane grew restless. Thor was away all that time. Every night she observed the stars and Loki began some observation of his own. He likely didn't plan to pay her the visit by falling off the Bifrost but once she took him in and he recovered the plot thickens and.. if u like the Avengers they come blasting in to find Loki, but it doesn't happen that way; most the charaCters took off EVEN WITH tHE Avengers all up to Asgard and the ending is one heluva surprise, I promise!

I want to be happy that they're together, but at the same time...she's going to die in 30-50 years and he'll remain looking as he is. That's a little sad to me. I did enjoy the story though.

Odin's an ass. He should have made an exception for her as she did save his son's life. I mean seriously. (

She was being a little over bitchy there for a bit.

VERY INTERTAINING PLOT MOVES A CUT ABOVE FANFIC CERTAINLY PORTRAYAL OF CHARACTERS GREAT LOKI JANE CONFLICT THEN A CHANGE PERFECT AS TO WHAT SEEMS REAL FOR THEM CANT WAIT TO READ THE STORY!
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I am enjoying this growing conflict. I can't wait to see what they do with Loki.

I really like the pace of the story and how no one is really jumping up to help him; you've got their characters down. So far you've laid a great foundation to build their relationship on.
The only thing that bothered/distracted me was the amount of times you wrote out Jane's name (75 times). It's not necessary to use it so much when we know who is doing what.

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