omfg the tension in this fic is almost too much to handle

I loved this book so muchhhhhhh! I didn't write a review in previous chapters because I was so hooked on the story, I couldnt help but read more and more! You're the BESTTTTTTT33333

YO NESD TO UPDATE PLEASE THIS JS A CLIFFJANGER WJY U DO THIS

That wa so in character I almost 's the cliched boy next door thing to do and it fits Alfred perfectly. I loved it. Very very well done

I like that aspect of Artie. It's very interesting Ndi d love to see you expand upon it. Brilliant twist to his character, but also in character too.

I love this too much. Words cannot say how great this is.

This is an amazing beginning; I laughed so hard. I am already see that you are avery talented writer.

I knew it was coming, but still... 'to be continued' -May 19th, 2013. Breaks ma' heart.
I loved the ride though~ :)

Thanks for writing how they met! :D

This made me laugh, my keyboard broken and my sister ask if I was high. XD Love your writing!

I love your writing! This one, although unfinished, is particularly good and was a pleasure to read. I love the way you portrayed all the characters, making them all distinctly in character while keeping the story interesting, funny, and charming

I haven't read this yet, but please update! My sister has read it and she loves it, and she keeps telling me to read it so-
Please?

Lol April fools is my birthday XD!

Just for you now, but in Vietnam people don't swear "lo d*t" at other (i know because i'm Vietnamese) :) and sometime they use English to swear :v

CAR, WHATS THIS SHIT? I HAVENT LOOKED FOR ANY UPDATES ON THIS FIC FOR OVER A YEAR (i forgot about it, i'm sorry,) AND WHEN I FIBALLY REALISE THAT IT EXISTS AGAIN, AND GET EXCITED OVER HOW MANY UPDATES AND MORE CHAPTERS THAT PROBABLY HAS BEEN ADDED, AND NOW THIS. NOTHING! ;;