This is a great story!

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So glad you A) gave Chris powers from the womb, & b) he's got more than just telekinesis & 3) they appear to be powers that he's inherited not random one's someone thought would be good.

Love Chris' comment about Wyatt being a demon magnet when he orbed the book, & Wyatt's ulterior motive. I laughed so hard at the line "you know you've got to talk more, orbing, poking and sighing will only get you so far". I absolutely loved the comment Chris made regarding Wyatt's book promoting violence. I can totally see Piper grounding Chris like that.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Good story! Liked the way Leo found out and the end when Chris got his memories back.

A few things... Your grammar is really bad. For example look up the different tenses of "freeze." That one really bugs me, although it is definitely far from being the only issue you have regarding grammar. Sometimes sentences are missing words too. Although, I do have to thank you for not using "mum." It always bugs me when writers do that because "Charmed" takes place in San Francisco, and Americans say "mom" not "mum."

I have a few issues with the story itself (mostly from the last chapter). I don't think Phoebe would have said "maybe he wasn't meant to be." That doesn't make sense in this particular situation. While it does seem harsh that she said that when Chris was ceasing to exist, it made sense. That was a completely different scenario; Chris had changed things by coming to the past, which included splitting his parents up. Ceasing to exist is a very plausible consequence of his actions (even if he had Wyatt's best interest in mind). Since Chris was obviously born and exists in the future, that would not be an issue. A better way to have worded it would to have been having Phoebe comment on the possibility of Chris being destined to die at age 23. Also, why didn't Wyatt try to heal Chris as soon as he saw the stab wound? I understand the family (other than Wyatt) coming to the realization that this stab wound is from past Chris, but to actually be talking about it without even trying to heal him first...

The last issue I have has to do with the pacing. Chris wakes up and doesn't know he is in the changed future. Piper and Leo explain it to him. And then the next thing we know Chris says he has both sets of memories. I understand being confused when he wakes up, but if Chris said that he had both sets of memories that fast then there's reason to believe that he would have had them both as soon as he woke up. He would not have been as confused as he was... seeing that as soon as Piper and Leo explained that he was in the changed future he says he has both sets of memories.

A side note: why would Piper scold her 25 year old son for minor swearing? That's just ridiculous. He's 25 years old and he can't say "hell"?

Yea! Great story! I totally agree with you about the reactions and Phoebe being a total butthole.

love it more please

Yeah, I had a sonogram done and a birdie too" - what's a birdie?

heh... now what are they going to tell Wyatt? _'

I really like the story especially the last chapter

:)

I like that Chris showed powers from the womb, I didn't like that they didn't do that on the show but I know they needed an excuse for Holly Marie Combs not be in as many scenes since she was actually pregnant cuz they obviously couldn't have her play invisible or works as much like they did with the Wyatt storyline.

Good chapter!