I did have a few moments of being lost as to who was speaking, otherwise I enjoyed this.

This was good!i bet if thir had even half of mycroft's care in this fic loki wouldnot have snapped

Oh god there's two of them!

Great story

Even though I can perfectly read and understand English, I find it rather difficult to express myself with it, so I hope it doesn't sound too ordinary and cliché if I just say that I think this story is great. Though I try to review as often as possible, there are some stories that I like so much I would like the review to actually show it. Wonderfully written, flows nicely, and (in my opinion) the perfect amount of emotion.
So that was it, I guess. Thank you for this piece.

I have spent a bit of time wondering what to say about your story because I have enjoyed reading it so much. It is a well plotted story with some lovely moments between the brothers that seem very much in character. You do a great job at allowing affection to be shared in a way that seems natural for them.

I particularly love the conversation between Mycroft and Sally Donavan, but all of the dialogue flows well.

Thank you for an entertaining read!

My my my. Do I spot a Star Trek Into Darkness reference here?

Awesome story. Nicely done

HA!
"I doubt he can hear us from across the street"
"Mr Anderson..."
Awesome!

Loved it. I really liked the Donvon's reaction when she realised that she was dealing with another Holmes just as smart as Sherlock - and in a position of power.

Mycroft is kick a** and one of my favorite characters. Thanks for the great story!

I did like your fic, but the fact that you prefixed Sally's same with St. caused a giggle everytime :D If ever a person was less of a saint it her :D Also Anderson wouldn't be Dr. I can't correct you to the specific title but he isn't a doctor :) good fic all in all :)

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Lovely, lovely story! Thank you so much) I have always thought that Sherlock and Mycroft have secretly very nice relationship between them, but not showing them. They care. Again: thanks)))

Aw. That was kind of cute. Nice to see Mycroft and Sherlock having a little good interaction - I think if Sherlock thought Mycroft was dead, he would have a bit of a problem with that. Typical Mycroft to let Sally rage about stuff before politely skewering her. I like how Anthea got a little screen time, too. My only question is, how on earth did John get there before Sherlock did?

That was absolutely brilliant. A protective Mycroft going all Government on either Anderson or Donovan is always priceless.

We haven't learned anything about Mycroft being a muppet. :)

The things we think we know, we may find out aren't what they seem. No spoiler, just my spec based on canon.