Oh my gosh! I have just found this great story. Loved it! I was so scared for Kate and Rick too. Love the way you write them. Thanks!

Not impressed with this story, too many unanswered questions

I hope the climax to this story is coming up soon because so far it's been boring.

Loved it! It had a good pace and I liked all the details you used. Thanks for writing, I really enjoyed it. And the ending was very cute!

If either of them dies at the end I'm going to be very unhappy...but great fic so far, I'm really enjoying it!

Damn. Good.

I'm slowly dying here because of this...Ugh...

What a terrific story. Nice filler, a totally complete atmosphere at the warehouse, the entering without back-up (what a great detail that completely vindicates the rest of your story), and immense detail to what the pair were put through. Again, you perfectly set the atmosphere from both POVs, and although my initial diagnosis was incorrect (although within the same family of diseases), your conclusion was medically (and dramatically) correct. I loved the detail of Kate and Rick being dumped at the ER, and Castle (again) having put together the pieces of the story. It did take me a new lines to figure out what was going on when you moved them into the hospital, but I think it was just my hope that the story would contain many more chapters. Very enjoyable; again, you did a terrific job!
-JG

Oh man, this was heartbreaking up until the end. And then it ended on such a lovely note. You really captured their fear and frustration. I was often as confused as Kate and Castle were, but I think that was partially your intention.

Loved it. Sequel please?

oh my heart. mY heart...is so glad they are of of that scary creepy place. And they r all okay. AJKLG I AM DEAD, THO. Dont know again what to do wit ALL THIS FEEELINGSSSS

oeiyy i dont know what am i anymore. Whats the next stage after being a puddle on the floor? seeping down to the ground all the way to six thousand feet under... ajklg

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH HHHHHHH

WHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY DO YOU ALWAYS PHYSICALLY HUUURRRT KATE BECKETT SO EVILLYYYY? AAAAAAAAAARRRRGHHH I CANT STAND KATE BECKETTT GOT PHYSICALLY HUUUUUUUURRRTS! I CANT. I CAN'T. WHAT IS THIS RE REAAAAAAAD. WHYYYY DOES IT HURT SO BAAAAAAAAAAD. ROLLLING ALL OVER THE BED. NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT IS THIS FEEEEEEELINGS INSIDE MY HEAAAAAAAAARRRT?! *TENDERIZING MY OWN HEART WITH A MALLET WHIST CRYING MY EYEBALLS OUT*