I know it's been a long time, but if you ever decided to write another chapter for this fic, I would be super pleased. I think L is so sharp and sexy here, and I wanna see Light lose it! ;) Good idea for a DN piece!

Please update! Ugh, it's so good!

OH PLZ PLZ YOU MUST CONTINUE IT, Y! THIS IS THE KIND OF STUFF I'M ALWAYS SEARCHING FOR WITH THIS DAMNED SHIPPING AND YOU'VE PERFECTLY NAILED IT! I'M TOTALLY INTO L SUFFERING SEXYLY AT LIGHT'S HANDS ASDFGHJKL I can't wait to read more, pease don't abandon this, it is too good ;_;

Not a nice fic? Well in my book, noncon, any forced content, forced kinks, kidnappings and mind screw is completely acceptable until the other makes the prisoner eat shit or drink piss. Now that is disgusting. I don't think Light would fo that to L. Also, although the beginning felt a bit ambiguous, I like this so I'll give you thumbs up and follow.

Impresionante, creo que deberías tenerte mas confianza, no solo has sabido relatar perfectamente incluso desde un punto en primera persona sin expresar pensamientos y emociones sin sentido totalmente innecesarios e irrelevantes, has sabido retratar perfectamente a los personajes, yo tampoco los veo como buenas personas, pero has dejado ver los lados mas humanos que tienen de manera interesante, bien redactada y no has dejado de lado su inteligencia y sus fallas, tales como la arrogancia de ambos o incluso sus dudas, le has dado a tu historia algo de misterio, humanidad, morbo y ciertamente sensualidad. Me impresiona lo mucho que puedes jugar con todas estas características me parece que te diviertes. En verdad creo que a muchos lectores nos gustaría que siguieras tu historia. Espero el siguiente capitulo con paciencia, seguiré esta historia por que en verdad quiero ver mas de ella.
Sigue escribiendo ;)

Me ha encantado espero mucho el próximo capitulo, me gusta como light tiene dos partes de si mismo que cargar y L trata de oponerse a el no importa la situación tu historia me ha fascinado espero con ansias la próxima parte.

This story is really interesting! Adding the eraser to the plot was a really good idea. You portray Light just perfectly.
But please, don't give up on it and update soon!

Since 4 yrs has gone by, I guess u lost interest in the story. Which is kinda sad because this is really good (the idea, your writing and everything...) I knew it was unfinished but I couldn't keep myself from reading it.
I am sorry I can't going on but I still want to tell u I really appreciated these 3 chapters. I hope u still writes) even if smtg else. You're good ato it.

Thx!

Woah, this is such a cool and fitting concept. An eraser to a notebook. I wonder if L really was in love with Light. Also, Light already seems over the bend, I'm curious to see how much more he will unravel and maybe even get to see some L POV. Thank you for writing!

Really really good idea! Would love to see it continued

I know this isn't much of a review; but all I can say is that I can't wait for more!

I loved it so far. The struggle between the easy route, and the hard. Of course for Kira it would easier with no L, with no distractions or obstacles. But Light needs him, he needs someone as smart as him, as confusing as him, as deep as him. I liked this story a lot so far, can't wait to see what you'll think of next.

Oooh~! Want more! :D

Eeeeeeee You updated! Omg that last line was perfect! Please update again soon *3*

It makes me want to cry that this story's probably dead... this is everything I was looking for in a Death Note fic and I can only subscribe and hope that you'll finish it some day...