Lovely ending! Thank you for sharing your writing talent.

Gotta love Emmet!

Your story is starting to drag so I hope it picks up soon.

I am doing my best to be patient. I normally don't read story's were the writer drags it out for two long because then it gets boring.

Edward calling her ass girl is horrible.

Cute story

Enjoyed their travels. A whole adventure started with public transport. Glad it ended that way too.

Cute story, enjoyed it.

"I am" comes off as so robotic and formal sometimes. Realistically most of the time people would say "I'm"

I really had a blast reading this story. It is excellent from the very beginning till the end. Thank you so much for sharing.

Oh my God, I freaking LOVE The Melting Pot. We have one here in Houston, and we go for special occasions (like daughter’s 18th birthday, but she and her friends sat separately from me, hubs and little brother... They have an amazing drink called the ‘Love Martini’ (coconut rum, peach schnapps and cranberry juice, with sliced strawberries floating on top to look like hearts). Soooooo good! I wish I were there with Bella and Edward!

I caught the fish! Hubs took me to Seattle (and later to Forks and the Olympic National Forest) for my surprise birthday trip! It was awesome! We did a Savor Seattle breakfast tour of Pike Place Market and hubs videoed me catching the fish: /2QH9tiUsjSc

I hope the link works, if not, look up “TxWarEagl” and then the video “Vicki catches fish!”. It was SO much fun! We also did the Space Needle and the Chihuly Glass Gardens (spectacular!).

Loving your story!

Even though it's late here tonight, I just had to finish this story, i could not stop reading it. Thank you for writing it, even though it was a few years ago

With as many fanfic stories that I have read in the last 10 years, how is it I never came across this one? But I must say I am really loving the build up between this Bella and Edward! Can't wait to see what happens next ️

Cute! Loved the ending. Thanks