It’s a great story and please make a sequel story!

i really enjoy this story i know it's be over 3 years since you have updated but hope you will take it up again. This is a very well written and enjoyable story.

Great story! i wish you would update though. I COMMAND YOU TO UPDATE! (please.) : )

I am confused, Is Nephrite Ned, Nick or Nate in this time line? Warrior- figher, not worrier- meaning one who worries. Jake Morgan as Prince Ben then Andrew as Prince Jake is confusing as well. You could try using older names like Charles. The animal guardians' names are too close in similarity, as well plus very odd. Otherwise very good.

best thing was the humiliation and receiving darien ray

Kaito hungry want to eat

Sorry, to answer your question on a review. I can't remember my password -.- so to answer your question I suppose if you want. It would interesting to see how you would tight her or him in.

I enjoy reading your story all the twists and turns, never seeing anything coming at all. The twins and siblings added to it? Fantastic! Now I'm wondering if Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto have brothers or sisters :) could you add more detail into what they look like? Dan I assume he looks like Lea and Rei? Also with Ben with Amy and Alex with Serena. Sorry if this is a little rude.

I can't get enough of this twist in the story ! 3

this is really good please update soon or when you can.

who the heck was that?

Great chapter

who is that person hiding?

Awesome Chapters. Can't wait to read the next. )

Keep going...

A cliffhanger - again. Please update soon.