Good story but hated the kibasasu I would’ve favorited this but that just threw me off and now I think I threw up in my mouth

Okay... I like your story. I enjoy the interaction Sasuke has with Naruto and Kiba and Sakura. I like Kakashi’s mysterious side and I enjoy how accurately you depict Sasuke’s mindset as someone who is abused. That is all great.

However... it is very wrong for Naruto and Kiba to be interested in Sasuke this way. It is wrong for Sakura to encourage. Sasuke is underage and not only is he underage he is emotionally abused and vulnerable. This chapter shows Kiba TAKING ADVANTAGE of him. It is very disturbing. Hopefully it’s addressed in later chapters! Eighteen is when someone becomes adult. Sixteen is not.

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Amazing and cute story. Read all in one day! I couldn't stop!
I really like the brotherly love between Itachi and Sasuke and usually don't like Sakura but in this story I loved her :)
I just wish a bit more of lemon between Naruto and Sasuke but I realise that Sas is to young so no problem. But when Naruto imaged Sasuke pregnant I wish that could turn true.
Thank very much for the story and thank for put in where because its so much easy to work with the font size and background contrast.

I'm going to reread this! Since you put it on ao3 but it's not complete there, I'll reread it here!

This story was wonderful

I started to cry when I read the part about the tattoo because I thought Itachi was dead.

This is really interesting. :D

I swear this book was so good and I almost cried at the sad and happy parts this book was just so amazing

This is a wonderful story! I was about to give up hope in finding any Naruto fan fiction about Sasuke and Itachi that was well-written, without hate or senseless, unrealistic smut. This was a touching story about the cycle of abuse. I love that you turned Sakura into a character I like, I'm not the biggest fan of her. Kakashi was written very interestingly. Sasuke was adorable and sad, and Itachi was perfect. Naruto's acting skills and Kiba's gruff affection impressive.

Thank you for giving me something good to read after finally finishing Naruto Shippuden. The first thing I do after finishing a series is look for good fan fiction about my favorite characters and I had been so disappointed at not finding any good ones until I found this. Take care!

So good, but so, so sad xc

Love this story, it's perfection, kinda sad kinda cute, kinda funny, what could get better?
Nothing, I already know!

You wrote a novel? What's the title? What penname you used? Please answer me, please? Please?

"It looked perfect. When we have a house, it's going to be just like this. A real family. For the first time in eight years, they would be like a real family." Wait, eight years? I thought his hell started when he was 10 and he's still 16?