Hikaru is right, simplest explanation is usually the correct one, and that is I love this fic **

"I'm in love with you!" YAY! AMAZING! Really heart warming and you may have just made my day! GREAT STORY! :) pLEASE WRITE MORE

I don't have any constructive critism for this, it's just perfect! Sweet and simple, it made me so happy! :)

So cute fluffy and sweet all packed into one. And so much shorter then all those angsty ones. So adorable

Oh! I absolutely loved this. The simplest explanation is not only usually correct, but also the one people don't want to acknowledge. Hikaru was perfect! I love how he thought it, questioned it for a second, then accepted it. I can't wait to read more of your stories!

The end? aww I wanted more. Good story.

This was very beautiful. I have no word's to describe this... this gave me a soft floaty feeling...like I could feel the mood you were creating... well done!

I hope to read more of your amazing stories!

untill next time!

~~~silentrose4~~~

GAH, THIS IS CUTE. It's not head-on Hitachiin twincest, which is a good thing for me. :P In other words, I'm partial to one-shots that tell about the start of the twincest things. -) I love it! :D