Excellent work, I hope to read even more!

This is adorable. I love this story more and more each time I read it. It feels like I'm inside Yuzuru's head, trying to figure out this mysterious girl he's crushing on. His confused mindset is shown, not told, and that's always a good thing.

The prose, specifically the eye color synonyms, can sometimes feel a bit bombastic, but not really. Eyes are really important in anime (most emotions are expressed through them) so it makes sense you'd focus on them a lot, and I'd probably complain more if you said gold and orange a lot. You strike a good balance, and that's not easy. Case in point, Harry Potter and "emerald orbs."

I liked the imagery in this chapter. I'm looking at the paragraph where Kanade steps in the sand (probably because it's at the end of the page lol) and I can just see it.

Sorry for the wall of text, but I just really like this story and it's inspired me to write an Angel Beats fic, and I haven't written anything since high school. I might just give it a shot.

More pleaseeee

Amazing. Hope you finish.

I do hope you go by your word and do manage to finish.

*Shivers*
This is good.

Are you alive?

Dude, it's been 4.

why oh why must this be discontinued?

Just came here right after watching EP 13. Read first part tears in my eyes already.

You have a very well developed writing style that is perfect for this kind of story, complimented by a colourful vocabulary. Your work is a pleasure to read!

The long awaited chapter 2 of book 3 didn't exactly disappoint me so much as it left me with more questions than answers. Not exactly a bad thing, as I hope that they're answered when you continue. The only issue I noticed with this chapter is that there are a significantly higher amount of typos and grammatical errors than any of your previous chapters, that makes me think that it might've been a bit rushed.

I don't think there are chunks of pork in there, it's more like chunks of tofu.

Hi there! Thank you very much for your time and effort writing this story. I just finished the anime lately, then I became a die-hard fan of Angel Beats! Thus looking through the internet for some stories for Kanade and Yuzuru after they've passed on from the Afterlife. This story is so great, and the greatest one I've read. It also still has the conmections from the anime. And the vocabulary you've put is amazing! I hope you'll continue the chapter 3 as soon as possible. Have a great day. :)

Hello there ! :)
That's a really nice story you're writting. I especialy loved the first arc, it was really sweet. After that though, the rest of the story feels kinda weird to me : maybe that's because we know from the start how it's gonna end... I dont know.
But still, I enjoyed your story and will be waiting for its continuation ;)