This story Is Interesting and the last chapter reminds me of Legend Of Zelda Majoras Mask. About

Oh, well done! I especially loved how you brought out the not-often-talked-about subject of elder abuse.

So Naruto can see ghosts?
That would explain his fear of them.

I am sure she would have agreec with that sentiment.

Gritty, tragic, and full circle - I don't want to become as paranoid as I used to be but this leaves me seesawing with suspicion at new people and old ones too.

that's the saddest yet.

nice work!

damn, this is spooky. i really like how you characterize the coup, not as a major event that consumes all thought but as something that will be inevitably over in an instant without fuss because of uchiha superiority. it really drives home the attitude that uchiha have about their personal superiority.

holy hell, thats deep. this shows Minato to be a better leader of a military force than any other fic I've read, its the only one that shows him to truly understand the mindset of a career soldier.

Ohh, I think I rather like this one... the might be dead at the end is rather brilliant!
And hello, btw. I have not reviewed for ages, but I am one of your faithful readers/followers 'cough' stalkers 'cough'

very good

I'm happy you've updated! Thank you. Will you write about Shisui? :D

Awesome story

Wow awesome a cop drama in the Leaf. I love this

nice