Reviews for Lost Boys
prominently late chapter 21 . 6/30
this was so wonderful. 10/10 would recommend
lady kae chapter 3 . 6/27
back in the old days there wasn't a standardized way to spell a singe word and then to top it off that word or name going to other countries where people speak differently anyway and it is as you see. english is the only language with a 'th' sound so Thor everywhere else is pronounced Tor. i guess what i am trying to say is it depends on which country you want it to be from, which is easier for you to spell or say and so on. personally i think the way you did it was fine, you've already written a few chapters so just continue as you are, dont worry.
by the way you are a very good writer.
Amethyst Kitsune chapter 21 . 4/23
This is such a wholesome and adorable story. I’ve read this story like three times and I enjoyed the adorable antics of the children.
PoisonCupcake101 chapter 3 . 4/17
That's fucking horrible, god or superheroes that child would still be in danger just by affiliation. Why does no one understand that it doesnt matter if they're good or bad, they still fight with others, powerful individuals that'll use any means necessary.
PoisonCupcake101 chapter 2 . 4/17
Eh, I like the idea better of his children being born as monsters/other creatures, its freaking cool and u muddied that unique trait by making them be born as humanoids.
Readasaurus chapter 3 . 10/16/2019
It's totally ok, don't worry, but it's true that for Jormugand/Jormungandr/Jormungand, you are using the least popular name, I'm also pretty sure- but don't quote me on this- that "Jormugand" is a misspelling. But on a different note, this story is amazing! I've almost never been this invested in a story on only the first three chapters! I really love it.
ephemeral-times chapter 21 . 8/3/2019
Wait, so who's Adelis' father?
Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2019
Ok, this story about Loki is ... really interesting. It's good, but still very interesting.
Oh, and just a few fact (not criticizing or anything), I remember that Sleipnir was borne by Loki when he shape-shifted into a female horse, to lure away a male horse so a giant could lose a bet and therefore kind of save Asgard. Jormungand, Fenris, and Hela were the offspring of him and a Frost Giantess with a long name.
But in the Norse world of Marvel, where Loki is Thor's sworn brother instead of sworn uncle, Odin is portraited a hela lot more noble than he truly was, the Vanir gods are not mentioned at all, and gods are mortal ... this is moderate. It certainly had my unwavering attention now.
Severus-Loki-Sirius-Firestar chapter 21 . 6/11/2019
I love this story! SEQUEL PLEASE!
777angeloflove chapter 21 . 1/23/2019
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! THIS STORY IS AWESOME!
SnowyFruitcake chapter 21 . 12/2/2018
Wow, a cute 'muggle' life it was. I love every one of the children (including Hela!) and of course the interaction they made with the Avengers. Especially with Steve, it was always too adorable! :) Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. I think now I cannot stop imagining Loki and his children growing up together as a family :)
Tegasus chapter 21 . 10/10/2018
That was a really great story, thanks for posting!
M.R. Doeriver chapter 21 . 7/30/2018
Great story. Well done. I am so in love with Loki's children. Thank you for a wonderful take on the Avengers.
Wanderer chapter 21 . 7/10/2018
That was amazing, so sad but so happy. You're a brilliant writer
Nyx Ro chapter 3 . 6/13/2018
*sob* Oh, to be back in 2012 when we all still thought Shield was the "good guys"!
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