Very sensuous and erotic.
You should write more Castle stories.
Best,

I want to see a few minute sparring Caskett scene in season 6. Also, Rick in the pillion of the motorbike that Kate will be driving.

Beautiful. Hot. Full of Caskett. Loved it.

Thats Pretty Dam good ... Needed to be A little longer Story

Wow! Amazing story. Really loved it. Time for a cold shower I think. ;)

Liv

ohh.. that last line. you are genius. and keeping me up way past my bed time.

The new writing style you were experimenting with? It worked. Nice, very nice.

I should be asleep right now but instead I'm completely stalking all of your stories cos I'm in love with the brilliance :D

LOVE it.

That...was...HOT!

Well holy shizzles! That was umm, yup, kinda hot! I loved how it went through a sequence from the aftermath of almost biting the dust(seriously how many times are these two almost gonna die before they finally give in?), to sparring(genious idea), to him actually hurting her(loved that whole part) to Kate finally going OH! Like duh! Lol. And the sex scene, shit, that was just hot. I like how both were demanding in actions and words!

Would I sound like a perv if I said I loved this? lol.

Getting all sweaty sparring, only to shower and then get all sweaty again. Can't see anything wrong with that. Nothing like a lot of foreplay.

Oh and btw, we get panadol here too.

Wowza, that was phenomenal. What a great sexy hot amazing story. Loved it!

I don't know what else to say other than I LOVED THAT FIC! :)

I love the casual way this starts. Her fear for him, him wondering what he'd done wrong now.

His reluctance, and then thinking like a guy. Then, the real scene not appealing, so much. Because he feels self-conscious.

Funny"Why would I have sweats here? I had no intention of sweating!"

Thank you for not making him a buffoon. Not a total hero either, but just realistic. Perfect. Of course, he'd hold back and be horrified if he hurt her. How perfect it is to imagine your sparring scene, knowing that it's so unlikely to happen on the show, but now I have some great images. Glistening biceps just the first one...

Love how Kate is so into their fluidity. How they are perfectly matched, once he stops holding back. (Of course, she's taught him to hold back, or else she sends him away; at times for months.) Anyway, really great short story. Hot, emotional and angsty. Really good.

Mmph! So good! I would love a scene on the show where Castle and Beckett spar. A little sweat would do them some good, haha. I'm off to read more of you now. Thanks for a great read!

Cheers,

x KS