I don't hate Edward, im just disappointed in him. If he really wanted to get rid of her there are definite ways to accomplish that. So why is he going about it all wrong? All he has to do is cheat on her. And he can do that without having actual sex. Or he could hit her. Im just saying. You don't have him trying hard enough. He could just fucking leave! But to have him ACT like this is what he wants only to put in minimal effort is fucking annoying.

And bella is fucking dilutional. I kinda want to kill her off.

So the plot is Edward is a gross whore who plays baseball and Bella was a virgin but now shes Edwards whore so he wont cheat? Got it. Im out.

I love this story. please keep writing.

I am a little confused as to what the pictures were on and how they shattered. I am solo invested in this story

I truly hope that everything is well in your world and that one day you will finish this absolutely amazing story. I re-read it for the fourth or fifth time last night - tears streaming down my face - it is simply beautiful

This was agreat story. I really enjoyed it! You really captured the emotional journey that I would imagine people go through when something like this happens. I was horrified by the guys in the physical therapy facility and I really hope that in real life people's spouses don't abandon them because they become paralyzed, although I suppose it does happen occasionally. Is there more to come? You didn't mark it complete but it could be finished where you left off here. I do want a bit more, to know what happens with his legs and whether he will be able to have a sex life again...It is fanfiction so I assume he'll recover his sexx life at least. :)

I cried so much but couldn't stop reading! You are a very gifted writer and craft words so amazingly. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.

Come back and finish your stories please. I miss them.

He could get rid of her soooo easy all he has to do is call a skank up get her names and wait for Bella to get home

I love the little glimpses of their past.

Thank goodness. I think this story has finally unburied itself from the angstmire. I need to take a breath! It's like a marathon which hopefully ends the same way - sweet!

He has made amazing progress on himself.

Loved it. Don delillo has nothing on you. Thanks.

I'm sorry Bella had to be injured to give Edward a wake-up call.

Is Edward's injury permanent?